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Could you help me with my post? Many thanks in advance How are things with you? What's the weather like? We have autumn like weather- a bit chilly, windy and wet. We are still enjoying our long weekend. Yesterday we went for a walk with my daughter. In spite it was cold, she made us stay outside for four hours. I got so cold in spite of wearing warm clothes and boots. As a result, she has a runny nose now. Thank God not me too. I got so tired after yesterday's long walk that I feel asleep quickly and slept as a log. My daughter woke me up at 8 am. I baked her pancakes. I try not to make pancakes as they have a high calorific value and I can eat ten of them ay one time. Yummy -Yummy. Then my daughter told me that there was no internet. As we agreed with my ex it is he who must pay for the internet because it is still in his name. She phoned him but he simply hanged up. She phoned three times but he hanged up three times. Then I messaged him to pay for the internet. Yesterday I applied for my new passport ( passport authorities, banks and shops work here even on bank holidays) . As I have regained my maiden surname I have to changed married surname on all my documents. It is a bit time consuming and involves extra expenses but I am not regretting about restoring my maiden surname. I was advised by my psychologists. I hope that unhappy past soon will be forgotten. Sorry for ranting. Thanks for lending me an ear. tomorrow after indulgences and pleasures of bank holiday I have to go to work Have a good week.
May 4, 2015 6:24 AM
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Could you help me with my post? Many thanks in advance

 

How are things with you? What's the weather like over there? Here we have autumn-like weather;  a bit chilly, windy and wet. However, we are still enjoying our long weekend.


Yesterday we my daughter and I went for a walk with my daughter. In spite even though it was cold, she made us me [she was willing but you weren't] stay outside for four hours. I got felt so cold in spite of wearing the warm clothes and boots I was wearing. As a result of staying out too long [You must have this because you got the cold because wearing the warm clothes and boots.  This is because they are the closest to this sentence], she has a runny nose now. Thank God that I did not have one not me too.


I got was so tired after from the yesterday's long walk that I feel fell asleep quickly and slept very well like as a log. My daughter woke me up at 8 am. I baked made [This is because pancakes are not baked in the over] her pancakes. I try not to make pancakes them as they have a high calorific value and I can eat ten of them at one time. However, they were so yummy [yum-yum]-Yummy.


Then my daughter told me that there was no internet. As we agreed with my ex, it is he who must pay for the internet because as the account it is still in his name. She phoned called her father him but he simply hung hanged up. She phoned three times but he hanged up three times Thrice she called, thrice she was hung up. Then I messaged texted him to pay for the internet service.


Yesterday I applied for my new passport and other bank documents.  Yes, even on bank "holidays", they are never closed. [So why is it called a holiday? Of course non-bank entities doesn't have to observe it.]  (passport authorities, banks and shops work here even on bank holidays) . As I have regained this is OK if you believe marriage is a robber taking your name away.  I would prefer the word, "resumed" my maiden surname I have to changed married surname on as all my documents bored the married name. It is a bit time consuming and involves extra expenses but I am not regretting about restoring my maiden surname. I was advised by my psychologists. I hope that the unhappy past soon will be forgotten. Sorry for ranting. Thanks for lending me an ear.
Tomorrow after my today's indulgences and pleasures of bank holiday Now I don't understand, earlier you said banks don't close on bank holidays... I have to go back to work.
Have a good week.

May 5, 2015

Could you help me with my post? Many thanks in advance

How are things with you? What's the weather like? We have autumn like weather here - a bit chilly, windy and wet.
We are still enjoying our long weekend.
Yesterday we I went for a walk with my daughter. In spite  Even though it was cold, she made us stay outside for four hours! I got so cold in spite of even though I was wearing warm clothes and boots. As a result, she has a runny nose now. Thank God not me too.


I got so tired after yesterday's long walk that I feel fell asleep quickly and slept as like a log. My daughter woke me up at 8 am. I baked her pancakes. I try not to make pancakes too often as they have a high calorific value are high in calories and I can eat ten of them ay at one time (or 'in one go'). Yummy -Yummy.


Then my daughter told me that there was no internet. As we I had agreed with my ex it is that he who must pay for the internet because it is still in his name. So she my daughter phoned him, but he simply hanged hung up. She phoned three times but he hanged hung up three every time s. Then So I messaged him, and asked him to pay for the internet. (or if you sent a strong message, you could say: 'and insisted that he pay for the internet.')


Yesterday I applied for my new passport ( passport authorities, banks and shops work here even on bank holidays) . As I have regained taken my maiden sur name again, I have to change d married the surname on all my documents. It is a bit time consuming and involves extra expense s but I am not regretting it at all! about restoring my maiden surname. I was advised by my psychologists to do it. I hope that that* unhappy past soon will be forgotten. Sorry for ranting. Thanks for lending me an ear.
Tomorrow after the indulgences and pleasures of the bank holiday I have to go to work.
Have a good week.

 

*It is strange to have 'that that' like this, but it is quite correct since you need to say 'hope that' and 'that unhappy past'.

 

Good job!

May 4, 2015
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