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First times! Hello, this's Chuss writting. I'm from Granada (Spain). This is my first time to writte in this book. I hope this web help me to improve my pour English. I'm booking any people to exchange languages Spain-English, writting and talking (listening? ). Now I think my level is low-intermediate, I've worked very hard almost five month ago and I hope I'll improve quickly. Bye bye, and thanks for your answer.
May 4, 2015 3:20 PM
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First times!

Hello, this's  this is Chuss writting writing. I'm from Granada (Spain).
This is my first time to writte  write in this book. 

I hope this website helps me to improve my poor English.
I'm booking  looking any for people to exchange languages Spanish - English, writting and talking (listening? ).
Now I think my level is low-intermediate, I've worked very hard for almost five months ago and I hope I'll improve quickly.
Bye bye, and thanks for your answer.

 

Lo hiciste bien!

May 30, 2015

First times!

Hello, this's this is Chuss writing. I'm from Granada (Spain).
This is my first time to write in this book.
I hope this web site helps me to improve my poor English.
I'm booking any looking for people to exchange languages Spanish-English, writing and talking (listening? ).
Now I think my level is low-intermediate, I've worked very hard for almost five months ago and I hope I'll improve quickly.
Bye bye, and thanks for your answer.

 

Very good for your first time! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

May 7, 2015
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