Barbara 勇晴
Homework 大家好,这是我今天的作业:几个简单的句子欢迎世界上各地地方的人到中国过来。 Hello everyone, this is my today's homework: few easy sentences inviting people from all over the world to come to China. If you find any mistakes please go ahead and correct them. x 你还没决定想在哪儿去旅行? 中国对人人都来说,就是最好旅游的地方!中国不但有很多古老名胜古迹,友好人民, 而且也有世界上最好吃的菜!其外中国灿烂得长城,就是一个世界七大奇观! 过来,看见,拍照! 友好-you3hao3-friendly 其外-qi2wai4-apart from that, in addition 奇观-qi2guan1-wonder 拍照-pai1zhao4-take a picture
May 4, 2015 3:36 PM
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你还没决定想去哪儿旅行?
中国对每个人来说,都是最适合旅游的地方!中国不但有很多古老的名胜古迹,友好的人民, 而且也有世界上最好吃的菜!此外中国灿烂的长城,是世界七大奇迹之一!
过来,看这儿,拍照! 

Comment if you have any questions.

May 4, 2015

Homework

大家好,这是我今天的作业:几个简单的句子欢迎世界上各地各个地方的人到中国来。
Hello everyone, this is my today's homework: few easy sentences inviting people from all over the world to come to China. If you find any mistakes please go ahead and correct them.
x


你还没决定想在哪儿旅行?
中国对人人都每位外国人来说,是最好旅游目的地的地方!中国不但有很多古老名胜古迹,友好人民, 而且也有世界上最好吃的菜!中国雄伟的灿烂得长城,一个世界七大奇观之一!
过来,看见,拍照!
友好-you3hao3-friendly
其外-qi2wai4-apart from that, in addition 没有“其外”这个说法,应该是“另外”
奇观-qi2guan1-wonder
拍照-pai1zhao4-take a picture

 

完成得比较好,没有太大的语法错误,只是些小细节需要注意。

May 5, 2015
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