Hector
Today is a day to run I'm preparing me for go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy. Mé and my friends love run, always go together. When the sun goes down is the perfect moment to go out.
May 5, 2015 12:18 AM
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Today is a day to run

I'm preparing me for  to go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy.   Me and my friends love run, always go together. 


When the sun goes down is the perfect moment to go out.

May 5, 2015
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Today is a day to run

I'm preparing to go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love it when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy. Me and my friends love to run, we always go together.

When the sun goes down it's the perfect moment to go out.

May 5, 2015
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Today is a day to run

I'm preparing me myself for go out to to go for a run. I usually run three or four times every a week. I love when my body feels exhausted, I feel free and full of energy. Mé and my friends My friends and I love to run, and we always go together.

When the sun goes down, that is the perfect moment to go out.

May 5, 2015
1

Today is a day to run

I'm preparing me for to go out to run. I usually run three or four times every week. I love when my body feels exhausted, because  I feel free and full of energy. Mé and my friends My friends and I love to run, we always go together.

When the sun goes down is the perfect moment to go out.

Better: The perfect moment to go out is when the sun goes down.

May 5, 2015
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