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Experience in Sydney part1 I gonna write my experience about when I was living Australia. I have been living in Australia for a year as a working holiday. At the beginning I couldn't speak English almost nothing because I've studied English for 6years while junior high to high school and English education was not good in Japan so that why.. Any way I decided to go to Australia.I just ambition that live in abroad and I wanted to talk with people of the world. After arrived in Sydney I was looking for the language school then I decided the school in "Manly" actually I was looking for school around city but I didn't like these school it was feel like a Tokyo, many asian people and croudy then my agent suggested me about "Manly" then we went to the inspection. Manly was awesome little bit far from city but have a beautiful sea and little town so I really like there sooner. When we were observing that school, a guy told to me some as in student room but I didn't understand what he said , he was student as that school. He said like "this school is very nice,people is very friendly and so much fun! You should come this school!" I thought that I want to be a friend with that guy and school seems nice and place is perfect then I decided that school!!! I just let you know, he gonna be a my boyfriend and we spend time for a long time . It was most beautiful time enteria my life.
May 5, 2015 4:07 AM
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Experience in Sydney Part1

I'm gonna write about my experience when I was living Australia.

I have been living in Australia for a year as a working holiday.
At the beginning I almost couldn't any speak English because I've studied English for 6years from junior high to high school and English education was not good in Japan.
Anyway I decided to go to Australia. My ambition was to live abroad and I wanted to talk with people of the world.

After I arrived in Sydney, I was looking for a language school and then I decided the school in "Manly". Actually I was looking for a school around the city, but I didn't like these schools because it feels like Tokyo. The city had many Asian people and was crowded, so my agent suggested me  "Manly" and we went to the inspection.
Manly was awesome, but a little far from city and has a beautiful sea and little town, so I really liked it there.

When we were observing that school, a guy told me something in the student room, but I didn't understand what he said. He was a student at that school.

He said
"this school is very nice,people are very friendly and so much fun! You should come to this school!"

I thought that I wanted to be a friend with that guy and the school seems like a nice place and is perfect, so I decided to choose that school!!!

I just let you know, he's gonna be my boyfriend and we spent a long time together.
It was the most beautiful time of my life.

 

Nicely written. Good job!

May 5, 2015
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