Please kindly edit my fictional story!

His eyes looked so painful and so did I!! (What do you mean by this??)
He began by introducing his name and where he was from and then...stayed quiet all of sudden!!
He looked down on the table!! I saw a few drops of tears started to fall down from his eyes!
He continued, we knew each other via Facebook!! I have never thought that I would fall head over heels in love with her!! We chatted like brother and sister! She told me everything about her, family, friends , school life, favorite singers and movie stars,as well as her hobbies and I shared with her mine too! Only a few months later, I started to get obsessed with her messages!! I wished she could reply my texts on time while I was waiting for her responses anxiously...
I viewed all her photos and smiled alone like an idiot....
(Ly started to smile with sorrow as he said those words)