Anna
Professional Teacher
Party I organized,last year a party for the eighteen's of my friend lisa. I buyed a lots of color balloon and garland, instead my friend mary prepared cake and other good foods. after i called ours friends,and I told they to come lisa's house's at 12 o clock... I remember when she open the door and saw me and the others sayed happy birhday! It was a fantastic day,and she was really happy for this. thank's for the corrections! <3
May 5, 2015 6:21 PM
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Party

I organized,last year a party for the eighteen's of my friend lisa. Last year, I organized a party for my friend Lisa's eighteenth birthday.
I Bought lots of colored balloons and garland, while my friend mary prepared cake and other good foods.

After i called ours friends,and I told them to come to lisa's house at 12 o clock...
I remember when she opened the door and saw me and the others saying happy birhday!
It was a fantastic day,and she was really happy about this.

thank's for the corrections! <3

May 5, 2015

Party

I organized,last year a party for the eighteen's of my friend lisa.
I buyed a lots of color balloon and garland, instead my friend mary prepared cake and other good foods.
after i called ours friends,and I told they to come lisa's house's at 12 o clock...
I remember when she open the door and saw me and the others sayed happy birhday!
It was a fantastic day,and she was really happy for this.

thank's for the corrections! <3

 

Last year, I organized a party for the eighteenth birthday of my friend Lisa.

I bought a lot of coloured balloons and my friend Mary prepared the cake and other tasty food.

Afterwards I called our friends and told them to come to lisa's house at twelve o clock.

I remember when she opened the door and saw me and the others.

We yelled say ''Happy Birthday!''.

It was a fantastic day and she was really hapy we trew her this party.

 

May 5, 2015
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