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Writing letters : To apply for an intern Writing is the most difficult part to me. Especially writing letters to people you are not familiar or even who never met before.I faced the situations in my college time.At that summer, I wished to intern in the museum i had visited. Then i wrote the request letter.Please tell is it proper or not.Then i won't make the same mistakes next time^^ To who may concern Hi! My name is OOO, a student from XXXXXXXX ,TNUA,Taiwan.I am interested in Thai cultural especially in museum and wish to apply for a internship position. Being a professional Chinese teacher in Phetchaburi for one year, I can speak Thai and team work with Thai people with ease. If you wish to know further information, Please feel free to contact me! Looking forward your favorable reply:-) Sincerely, OOO
May 6, 2015 8:52 AM
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Writing is the most difficult task for me. Especially writing letters to people you are not familiar with or have never met before.I faced these situations at college. In the summer, I wished to intern in the museum I had visited. Then i wrote the request letter. Please tell me if it is proper or not. Then I won't make the same mistakes next time^^ 


To whom it may concern

Hi! My name is OOO, a student from XXXXXXXX ,TNUA,Taiwan. I am interested in Thai culture, especially in museums and wish to apply for a internship position.

Being a professional Chinese teacher in Phetchaburi for one year, I can speak Thai and team work with Thai people with ease. If you wish to know further information, Please feel free to contact me!

Looking forward your favorable reply:-)

Sincerely,
OOO

May 6, 2015
Thank you so much for suggestion:)
May 7, 2015
Robert did a great job with his correction below, but he missed one! It should say "an internship" instead of "a internship". Good luck!
May 6, 2015
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