Jonathan
College and some other things. This is my second year in college but it's my first year learning English seriously. It's not so easy. Sometimes I feel dessapointed cause I'm not in a high level but I think sometimes it's normal to feel it. But that doesn't stop me to continue learning. This Friday I will have a presentation about natural disasters and I will talk specifically about thunderstorms. Talking about topics like this is not so easy cause there are a lot of unknown words for me. Moreover, that's good for my vocabulary. Thanks for reading this. Tell me if I made mistakes please. Have a good day.
May 6, 2015 11:50 AM
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I disagree with some of Alan's corrections. There's no problem with saying "learning." See my corrections below:

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College and some other things.

This is my second year in college but it's my first year learning English seriously. It's not so easy. Sometimes I feel dissapointed cause I'm not in  at a high level but I think sometimes it's normal to feel it that way. But that doesn't stop me to from continuing to learn.
This Friday I will have a presentation about natural disasters and I will talk specifically about thunderstorms. Talking about topics like this is not so easy cause there are a lot of unknown words for me. Moreover, that's good for my vocabulary.
Thanks for reading this. Tell me if I made mistakes please. Have a good day.


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Good job! Remember that "cause" is a really informal way of saying "because." You should not use "cause" for any formal writing. Also it's not normal to use a period in a title.

March 8, 2016
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College and some other things.

This is my second year in college but it's my first year to learn English seriously. It's not so easy. Sometimes I feel disappointed because I'm not in a high level but I think sometimes it's normal to feel that way. But that doesn't keep me from continuing to learn.
This Friday I will have a presentation about natural disasters and I will talk specifically about thunderstorms. Talking about topics like this is not very easy because there are many unknown words for me. Moreover, it's [talking is] good for my vocabulary.
Thanks for reading this. Tell me if I made any mistakes, please. Have a good day.

May 6, 2015
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