FCE writing_informal letter The question was that you have received the following email from your English penfriend: It's a really brave step to take a year out of college to come and spend 6 month

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FCE writing_informal letter The question was that you have received the following email from your English penfriend: It's a really brave step to take a year out of college to come and spend 6 months in the UK! What are you planning to do with your time? Find a job? Learn some new skills? Write back and give me more details of your plans so I can do my best to help you have a good time... Write your letter of reply to your penfriend (around 140-190 words) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Claire, Many thanks for your email-it was great to hear from you. How are things with you? I've been really busy planning to go to the U.K. but it's really exciting! You remember I told you in my last letter that I'm going there in this summer. I think I'm attending English course in London for 4 months because I want to make sure my English grammar with outstanding teachers. After finishing my courses, I want to work in a local pub,which is quite traditional, for one month. As you know, I love drinking draught beer when I watch live football match. So I'm going to a football stadium tour at the end of my stay. Would you like to go with me? I know you also love watching football. It'll be fun! So I have a couple of questions. which language centre is the best value for money? also can you help me about how to write CV in English? Your help will make me absolutely delighted. I'd better stop now and I'll bring something special for you. I can't wait to meet up soon! Best wishes, Ruri

May 6, 2015 2:42 PM

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Thank you for your email - it was great to hear from you. How are things with you?
I've been really busy planning for my trip to the U.K., but I am really excited!

You remember I told you in my last letter I will be going there this summer. I think I will attend an English course in London for 4 months. I want to make use of the outstanding teachers to improve my grammar!
After finishing my courses, I want to work in a local, traditional pub for one month, and go on a football stadium tour at the end of my stay. As you know, I love drinking draught beer while watching live football matches. Would you like to go with me? I know you also love watching football. It'll be fun!

I have a couple of questions. Which language centre has the best value for its price? Also can you help me write a CV in English? Your help would be much appreciated.

I'll bring something special for you. I can't wait to meet up soon!

Best wishes,
Ruri

May 6, 2015

FCE writing_informal letter

After finishing my courses, I want to work in a local pub, which is quite traditional, for one month. As you know, I love drinking draught beer when I watch a live football match. So I'm going on a football stadium tour at the end of my stay. Would you like to go with me? I know you also love watching football. It'll be fun!

So I have a couple of questions. Which language centre is the best value for money? Also can you help me about how to write CV in English? Your help will make me absolutely delighted.

I'd better stop now and I'll bring something special for you. I can't wait to meet up soon!

Best wishes,
Ruri

Ruri, I have no doubt that this letter is of the standard required for FCE.

Content -All the content is relevant to the task and the target reader is fully informed so this would get a high mark - Probably a 5

Communicative Achievement - Again I believe this section would get a high mark

Organisation - Correctly laid out and good use of connecting devices - 5

Language - A few minor mistakes but they do not interfere too much with meaning -Probably 4+

Overall I think this is a very good answer at First level, well done!

May 6, 2015

FCE writing_informal letter

The question was that you have received the following email from your English penfriend:

It's a really brave step to take a year out of college to come and spend 6 months in the UK! What are you planning to do with your time? Find a job? Learn some new skills? Write back and give me more details of your plans so I can do my best to help you have a good time...

Write your letter of reply to your penfriend (around 140-190 words)

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Dear Claire,

Many thanks for your email (Thank you for your email)-it was great to hear from you. How are things with you? (How have you been?/How are you doing?)
I've been really busy planning to go to the U.K. but it's really exciting!

You Remember I told you in my last letter that I'm going there in this summer? I think I'm going to be attending an English course in London for 4 months because I want to improve make sure my English grammar with outstanding teachers.
After finishing my courses, I want to work in a local pub,which is quite traditional, for one month. As you know, I love drinking draught beer when I watch live football matches. So That's why I'm also going to a football stadium tour at towards the end of my stay. Would you like to go with me? I know you also love watching football. It'll be fun!

So I have a couple of questions. First, which language centre is the best value for the money? also Moreover, can you help me about how learn to write a CV in English? Your help will make me absolutely delighted (I would greatly appreciate your help)

I'd better stop now. and I'll bring you something special next time I see you! for you. I can't wait to meet up soon!

Best wishes,

Ruri