Informal essay Hi, everyone, nice to meet you! Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through the italki. I know

Kiki

Informal essay Hi, everyone, nice to meet you! Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through the italki. I know that my grammar exists the mistake, but failure is the mother of success, I believe that I can speak fluently English in the future. You can contact me if you want to exchange the language, I will teach you to learn mandarin. Look forward to you!

May 6, 2015 3:10 PM

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Informal essay

Hi, everyone, nice to meet you!
Firstly, I will introduce myself, my name is Kiki, I’m 22 years old. I want to improve my English and make friends with you through (the) italki. I know that my grammar includes mistakes (exists the mistake,) but failure is the mother of success, I believe that I can speak English fluently (English) in the future. You can contact me if you want a language exchange, (to exchange the language,) I will teach you (to learn) mandarin.
Look forward to hearing from you!