Jakub
An essay. Majority of teenagers dream about being adult. Everybody wants to organize a remarkable party, but doesn’t have to do it alone. It can be the celebration organized by two or three people. But is it good option for birthday boys and their guests? In my opinion – yes. From the adult organizers point of view, coordination of the birthday party is quite difficult. In spite of it, it’s better to make the birthday party with one or two close friend because you can invite more people. Furthermore it’s possible to save a lot of money. For instance, renting a room in a club for one night is very expensive. So If some people do it each other, they will spend less money. Finally, there is more eating and drinking for everybody. People love meeting new friends. That’s the first advantage for guests. When a party is organized by two or three colleagues, there are more people who you can know. What is more, the party is bigger so there is more fun. You can sing, dance and just entertain with many people at the same time. In addition, it’s easier to buy a present because you can just do a donation for three buddies. All in all, organizing the eighteen party with one or two friends is better than doing it alone. Everybody benefits and it’s a lot of fun,
May 6, 2015 7:02 PM
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An essay.

Majority of teenagers dream about being an adult. Everybody wants to organise a remarkable party, but they don’t have to do it alone. It could be a celebration organised by two or three people. But is it a good option for the birthday boys and their guests? In my opinion – yes.

From the adult organisers point of view; coordination of a birthday party is quite difficult. In spite of it, it’s better to make the birthday party with one or two close friend because you can invite more people. Furthermore it’s possible to save a lot of money. For instance, renting a room in a club for one night is very expensive. So If some people do it with each other they will spend less money. Finally, there is more eating and drinking for everybody.

People love meeting new friends. That’s the first advantage for guests. When a party is organised by two or three colleagues, there are more people for you to meet. What is more, the party is bigger so there is more fun. You can sing, dance and be entertained with many people at the same time. In addition, it’s easier to buy a present because you can send one together.


All in all, organising an eighteenth party together with your friends is far better than doing it alone; everybody benefits and it’s a lot of fun.

May 6, 2015
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