Kevin
Selamat malam *Tolong perbaiki kalimat saya jika salah 1. Long time no see. Lama tidak bertumu. 2. Do you remember me? Apakah Anda ingat saya? 3. I still have a long way to go (I have to study more) Saya masih harus banyak belajar. 4. What is your hobby? Hobi Anda apa? 5. My hobby is playing soccer. Hobi aku sepak bola. 6. I have to memorize many vocabularies and it is very difficult. Saya harus menghafal banyak kosa kata dan merasa sulit sekali. 7. How many do you need? Berapa banyak apakah anda perlu? 8. Thank you for your message. Terimakasih kepada pesan Anda. 9. Thank you for your reply. Terimakasih kepada balasan Anda. 10. I think we can send it to you within 2 days. Saya berpikir bahwa kami bisa mengirim itu kepada Anda dalam 2 hari. Awaited for your help! Thank you
May 10, 2015 12:47 PM
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Selamat malam

*Tolong perbaiki kalimat saya jika salah

1. Long time no see.
Lama tidak bertumu bertemu. (you could also use "berjumpa", it's more common)

2. Do you remember me?
Apakah Anda ingat saya?

3. I still have a long way to go (I have to study more)
Saya masih harus banyak belajar.

4. What is your hobby?
Hobi Anda apa?

5. My hobby is playing soccer.
Hobi aku main sepak bola.

6. I have to memorize many vocabularies and it is very difficult.
Saya harus menghafal banyak kosa kata dan merasa itu sulit sekali. ("sulit sekali" in there is not wrong, but it's better to use "sangat sulit", look at it this way "very" mean "sangat" and "difficult" mean "sulit" hence "very difficult" mean "sangat sulit")

7. How many do you need?
Berapa banyak apakah yang anda perlu?

8. Thank you for your message.
Terima kasih kepada atas pesan Anda.

9. Thank you for your reply.
Terima kasih kepada atas balasan Anda.

10. I think we can send it to you within 2 days.
Saya berpikir bahwa kami bisa mengirimkannya itu kepada Anda dalam waktu 2 hari.

Awaited for your help!

Thank you

May 10, 2015
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Selamat malam

*Tolong perbaiki kalimat saya jika salah

1. Long time no see.
Lama tidak bertumu bertemu.

2. Do you remember me?
Apakah Anda ingat saya?

3. I still have a long way to go (I have to study more)
Saya masih harus banyak belajar.

4. What is your hobby?
Hobi Anda apa?

5. My hobby is playing soccer.
Hobi aku sepak bola.

6. I have to memorize many vocabularies and it is very difficult.
Saya harus menghafal banyak kosa kata dan merasa ini sulit sekali.

7. How many do you need?
Berapa banyak apakah anda perlu?

8. Thank you for your message.
Terimakasih kepada pesan Anda. (this is quite wrong but people will understand)

alt:

Terimakasih untuk pesan Anda


9. Thank you for your reply.
Terimakasih kepada balasan Anda. (this also quite wrong, but the general idea is delivered)

alt:

Terimakasih untuk balasan Anda

10. I think we can send it to you within 2 days.
Saya berpikir bahwa kami bisa mengirim itu ini kepada Anda dalam 2 hari.
itu= That

ini= This/it


Awaited for your help!

Thank you

May 11, 2015
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Selamat malam

*Tolong perbaiki kalimat saya jika salah

1. Long time no see.
Lama tidak bertemu/berjumpa


5. My hobby is playing soccer.
Hobi aku bermain sepak bola.

6. I have to memorize many vocabularies and it is very difficult.
Saya harus menghafal banyak kosa kata dan ini sangat susah

7. How many do you need?
Berapa banyak yang anda perlu/ butuhkan?

8. Thank you for your message.
Terimakasih atas pesan Anda.

9. Thank you for your reply.
Terimakasih atas balasan Anda.

10. I think we can send it to you within 2 days.
Saya pikir kami bisa mengirim itu kepada Anda dalam 2 hari.

Awaited for your help!

Thank you.

 

Well done, goodjob, awesome

May 11, 2015

Selamat malam

*Tolong perbaiki kalimat saya jika salah

1. Long time no see.
Lama tidak bertemu.

2. Do you remember me?
Apakah Anda ingat saya?

3. I still have a long way to go (I have to study more)
Saya masih harus banyak belajar.

4. What is your hobby?
Apa hobi Anda?

5. My hobby is playing soccer.
Hobi aku bermain sepak bola.

6. I have to memorize many vocabularies and it is very difficult.
Saya harus menghafal banyak kosa kata dan itu sangat sekali.

7. How many do you need?
Berapa banyak yang Anda perlu?

8. Thank you for your message.
Terima kasih untuk pesan Anda.

9. Thank you for your reply.
Terima kasih untuk balasan Anda.

10. I think we can send it to you within 2 days.
Saya pikir bahwa kami bisa mengirim itu kepada Anda dalam 2 hari.

Awaited for your help!

Thank you

November 6, 2015

Selamat malam

*Tolong perbaiki kalimat saya jika salah

1. Long time no see.
Lama tidak bertemu.

2. Do you remember me?
Apakah Anda ingat saya?

3. I still have a long way to go (I have to study more)
Saya masih harus banyak belajar.

4. What is your hobby?
Hobi Anda apa?

5. My hobby is playing soccer.
Hobi aku sepak bola.

6. I have to memorize many vocabularies and it is very difficult.
Saya harus menghafal banyak kosa kata dan merasa sulit sekali.

7. How many do you need?
Berapa banyak yang anda perlukan?

8. Thank you for your message.
Terimakasih atas pesan Anda.

9. Thank you for your reply.
Terimakasih atas balasan Anda.

10. I think we can send it to you within 2 days.
Saya berpikir bahwa kami bisa mengirim itu kepada Anda dalam 2 hari.

Awaited for your help!

Thank you

November 7, 2015
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