Eybelle
長かと居と Osaka and Kyoto
私はイベルです。２２歳です。せんしゅうにきょととおさかにいきました。おさかでたこやきをたべました。たこやきをおいしいかった。
I am Eybelle. I am 22 years old. Last week I went to Kyoto and Osaka. I ate Takoyaki in Osaka. The Takoyaki was delicious.
May 22, 2015 12:04 AM
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長かと居とおおさかときょうと Osaka and Kyoto
私はイベルです。２２歳です。せんしゅうに、きょときょうととおさかおおさかにいきました。おさかおおさかでたこやきをたべました。たこやきをはおいしいかった。
I am Eybelle. I am 22 years old. Last week I went to Kyoto and Osaka. I ate Takoyaki in Osaka. The Takoyaki was delicious.
Your writing was really good. There were no major mistakes.
Keep up the good work!
P.S. I'm glad to hear that you had a good time in Osaka and Kyoto.
May 22, 2015
Kanji para おおさか y きょうと son 大阪 y 京都, pero no tienes que usar los kanji que todavía no sabes.
May 22, 2015
Hola, muy buen trabajo y espero que sigas disfrutando tu viaje.
May 22, 2015
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Eybelle
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English, Japanese, Spanish
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Japanese
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