Arthur 王昊烨
150522 - 自己:兵马俑 你好朋友们。 今天我们参观了兵马俑。它们很了不起。 我们做了公共汽车。坐公共汽车从西安火车站到兵马俑要一个小时。依我看中国的公共汽车很好。它们也太便宜了! 在兵马俑有了非常多人。幸运兵马俑的博物馆也很大!因为我们关于兵马俑的历史想了学习,我们雇了(?)一位叫宋的导游。 有非常多兵马俑,其实有大概八千!我们也学了皇帝死的时候他也领了杀十万人所以在来生他有了一共十八千的侍役。 下午我们回来了西安城市。我很喜欢西安。如果你参观西安的话,我可以建议一个很好的客店叫 “HanTangHouse”。 明天我们打算坐火车去上海。我就很兴奋! 谢谢你的帮助! 下次见! 亚瑟 25 minutes - typed *** Hello friends. Today we visited the Terra Cotta Warriors. They are extraordinary. We took the bus. Taking the bus from Xi'an train station to the Terra Cotta Warriors takes one hour. In my opinion Chinese busses are great! They are also super cheap! There were loads of people at the Terra Cotta Warriors, Luckily the Terra Cotta Warrior museum is also very big! Because we wanted to learn lots about the history of the Terra Cotta Warriors we hired a guide called Song. There are loads of Terra Cotta Warriors, in fact there are about 8,000. We also learned that when the emperor died he ordered 10,000 people to be killed so in total he had 18,000 attendants in the afterlife. In the afternoon we came back to Xi'an. I really like Xi'an. If you come and visit I can recommend a great guest house called "Han Tang House". Tomorrow we plan to travel to Shanghai by train. I'm super exited about it. Thank you for your help! See you next time, Arthur
May 22, 2015 10:04 AM
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150522 - 自己:兵马俑

你好朋友们。

今天我们参观了兵马俑。它们很了不起。

我们(坐)了公共汽车。坐公共汽车从西安火车站到兵马俑要一个小时。依我看中国的公共汽车很好。它们也太便宜了!

在兵马俑有(很)了非常多人。幸运(的是)兵马俑博物馆也很大!因为我们(想了解很多)关于兵马俑的历史想了学习,我们雇了一位(姓)宋的导游。

有非常多(的)兵马俑,其实大概(有)八千!我们也(知道)了皇帝死的时候(下命令杀了一)他也领了万人所以在来生他有了一共(有一万八)十八千(名)侍役。

下午我们回(到)了西安城市。我很喜欢西安。如果你参观西安的话,我可以(推荐给你)建议一个很好的(叫“HanTangHouse”的)客店叫 “HanTangHouse”

明天我们打算坐火车去上海。我(特别)就很兴奋!

谢谢你的帮助!

下次见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends.

Today we visited the Terra Cotta Warriors. They are extraordinary.

We took the bus. Taking the bus from Xi'an train station to the Terra Cotta Warriors takes one hour. In my opinion Chinese busses are great! They are also super cheap!

There were loads of people at the Terra Cotta Warriors, Luckily the Terra Cotta Warrior museum is also very big! Because we wanted to learn lots about the history of the Terra Cotta Warriors we hired a guide called Song.

There are loads of Terra Cotta Warriors, in fact there are about 8,000. We also learned that when the emperor died he ordered 10,000 people to be killed so in total he had 18,000 attendants in the afterlife.

In the afternoon we came back to Xi'an. I really like Xi'an. If you come and visit I can recommend a great guest house called "Han Tang House".

Tomorrow we plan to travel to Shanghai by train. I'm super exited about it.

Thank you for your help!

See you next time,

Arthur

May 22, 2015
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150522 - 自己:兵马俑

你好朋友们。

今天我们参观了兵马俑。它们很了不起壮观)。

我们了公共汽车。)公共汽车从西安火车站到兵马俑要一个小时。依我看我认为中国的公共汽车很好。它们也太便宜了!

在兵马俑有非常多人当我们到达兵马俑的景点的时候,那里已经有很多游客了)。(所幸,幸运的是兵马俑的博物馆也很大!因为我们很想学习关于兵马俑的历史想了学习所以我们雇了(?)一位宋的导游。

那里有非常多兵马俑,其实有大概八千!我们也了解到了皇帝死的时候他也领了杀十万人所以在来生他有了一共十八千的侍役。 (what does it mean?)他命令要杀掉10万人(1万人?you wrote “10000 people” in English),使他在来生能够有一万八千人来服侍他。

下午我们回了西安城市。我很喜欢西安。如果你参观西安的话,我可以建议一个很好的(旅馆)叫 “HanTangHouse”。

明天我们打算坐火车去上海。我感到很兴奋!

谢谢你的帮助!

下次见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends.

Today we visited the Terra Cotta Warriors. They are extraordinary.

We took the bus. Taking the bus from Xi'an train station to the Terra Cotta Warriors takes one hour. In my opinion Chinese busses are great! They are also super cheap!

There were loads of people at the Terra Cotta Warriors, Luckily the Terra Cotta Warrior museum is also very big! Because we wanted to learn lots about the history of the Terra Cotta Warriors we hired a guide called Song.

There are loads of Terra Cotta Warriors, in fact there are about 8,000. We also learned that when the emperor died he ordered 10,000 people to be killed so in total he had 18,000 attendants in the afterlife.

In the afternoon we came back to Xi'an. I really like Xi'an. If you come and visit I can recommend a great guest house called "Han Tang House".

Tomorrow we plan to travel to Shanghai by train. I'm super exited about it.

Thank you for your help!

See you next time,

Arthur

May 22, 2015
你好,我就是西安人,欢迎再来西安玩儿:) Hello!I'm Xi'an resident. Welcome to Xi'an again:)
May 28, 2015

150522 - 自己:兵马俑

你好朋友们,你们好

今天我们参观了兵马俑。它们很了不起太令人震惊了。

我们坐了公共汽车。坐公共汽车从西安火车站到兵马俑要一个小时。依我看,中国的公共汽车很好。它们真是太便宜了!

在兵马俑有了非常多人。幸运的是兵马俑的博物馆也很大!因为我们想学习关于兵马俑的历史想了学习,所以我们雇(?)一位叫宋的导游。 


有非常多兵马俑,其实有大概八千!我们也学了了解到,皇帝死的时候他也领了十万人,所以来生他有了一共十八千的侍役。

下午我们回了西安市。我很喜欢西安。如果你参观西安的话,我可以给你推荐建议一个很好的旅馆客店叫 “HanTangHouse”。

明天我们打算坐火车去上海。我很期待就很兴奋

谢谢你的帮助!

下次见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends.

Today we visited the Terra Cotta Warriors. They are extraordinary.

We took the bus. Taking the bus from Xi'an train station to the Terra Cotta Warriors takes one hour. In my opinion Chinese busses are great! They are also super cheap!

There were loads of people at the Terra Cotta Warriors, Luckily the Terra Cotta Warrior museum is also very big! Because we wanted to learn lots about the history of the Terra Cotta Warriors we hired a guide called Song.

There are loads of Terra Cotta Warriors, in fact there are about 8,000. We also learned that when the emperor died he ordered 10,000 people to be killed so in total he had 18,000 attendants in the afterlife.

In the afternoon we came back to Xi'an. I really like Xi'an. If you come and visit I can recommend a great guest house called "Han Tang House".

Tomorrow we plan to travel to Shanghai by train. I'm super exited about it.

Thank you for your help!

See you next time,

Arthur

May 28, 2015
我也非常喜欢西安!
May 23, 2015
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