Fernando
Describing a photo. In this photograph, we can see a line of people in a queue. Probably, the place is an airport, of course, I'm almost sure, because is a large space with people with their suitcases, and at the background of the picture you can guess many check-in desks. In the foreground, we can see three people, one woman and two men. The first person in the queue is the woman. She looks like Hindu due to her clothes and her hair and skin. She has black hair and is wearing a long, pink, and yellow scarf, another blue scarf around her neck, and a pink kind of dress, that I don't know how to call. She is pushing a trolley with a black suitcase on it. Behind her, a man holds two black suitcases. He is not very tall, in fact, he looks like less tall than the woman. He is wearing a black shirt, a black trousers, and a black, bright belt. He has a little bag hanging his left shoulder, that looks like a laptop bag. His hair is a bit long and brown. I think he is traveling for work. The last in the queue is a younger man than the another. He has in front of him a black bag and hanging of his back has a huge, blue rucksack. He is wearing a blue shirt, a clock or a bracelet, a brown hat and a white or grey trousers with a big pocket beside the leg. He hangs a paper with his left hand.
May 22, 2015 6:40 PM
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Describing a photo.

In this photograph, we can see a line of people in a queue. Probably, The place is probably an airport. of course, I'm almost sure, because it is a large space with people with their suitcases, and in the background of the picture you can see many check-in desks. In the foreground, we can see three people, one woman and two men. The first person in the queue is the woman. She looks like Hindu Indian due to her clothes and her hair and skin. She has black hair and is wearing a long, pink and yellow scarf, another blue scarf around her neck, and a pink kind of dress, that I don't know the name of (it looks like a sari). She is pushing a trolley with a black suitcase on it. Behind her, a man holds two black suitcases. He is not very tall. In fact, he looks like shorter than the woman. He is wearing a black shirt, a black trousers, and a black, bright belt. He has a little bag hanging from his left shoulder that looks like a laptop bag. His hair is a bit long and brown. I think he is traveling for work. The last man in the queue is a younger man than the other. He has in front of him a black bag in front of him and a huge, blue rucksack hanging on his back has a huge, blue rucksack. He is wearing a blue shirt, a watch, a brown hat and a white or grey trousers with a big pocket beside the leg. He is holding a piece of paper in his left hand.

May 22, 2015

Describing a photo.

In this photograph, we can see a line of people in a queue. Probably, the place is an airport, of course, I'm almost sure, because it is a large space with people with their suitcases, and at in the background of the picture you can guess make out many check-in desks. In the foreground, we can see three people, one woman and two men. The first person in the queue is the woman. She looks like Hindu due to her clothes and her hair and skin. She has black hair and is wearing a long, pink, and yellow scarf, another blue scarf around her neck, and a pink kind of dress, that I don't know how to call what it's called. She is pushing a trolley with a black suitcase on it. Behind her, a man holds two black suitcases. He is not very tall, in fact, he looks like less tall (<em>or</em> smaller) than the woman. He is wearing a black shirt, a black trousers, and a black, bright shiny belt. He has a little bag hanging from his left shoulder, that looks like a laptop bag. His hair is a bit long and brown. I think he is traveling for work. The last in the queue is a younger man than the another. He has in front of him a black bag and hanging off his back he has a huge, blue rucksack. He is wearing a blue shirt, a clock watch or a bracelet, a brown hat and a white or grey trousers with a big pocket beside on the side of the leg. He hangs holds (<em>or</em> he is holding) a paper with in his left hand.

 

Very well described. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

I don't know why, but I would usually say "a shiny black belt" rather than "a black shiny belt".

May 25, 2015
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