mohammad
Changing in the Time My friend used to study a lot. He was a quiet and good student. He used to stay at his room and study for hours without having fun! Actually you can say he was a real nerd! But he has changed lately. He learns playing a musical instrument. He takes music classes and wants to be professional in that. One day, he'll be a great musician. These days, he also goes to the gym regularly. He takes fitness classes and in soon he'll be in great shape and he might be a very attractive athlete. In the next year, he is going to propose the girl which he loves. Soon he won't have free times enough. He might spend more time with his wife and he will be very busy!
May 22, 2015 9:35 PM
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The Change 

A friend of mine who was quite and hard working student used to stay home and spend hours working and have no fun. even you could call him a real nerd.

 

But nowadays he has   changed. He has started taking music classes and to learn play a musical instrument and  wants to be a professional on that. I  hope he'll be a great musician.

He also has started to go gym regularly. He takes fitness classes and he'll be in great shape and a very attractive athlete soon.

 

next year, he is going to propose the girl who he loves. He will be spending his time with his wife and will be very busy.

 

(a bit changed but elegant I think ;-))

May 22, 2015
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Changing in the Time

My friend used to study a lot. He was a quiet and good student. He used to stay at in his room and study for hours without having fun! Actually you can say he was a real nerd! But he has changed lately. He learns playing learning to play a musical instrument. He takes music classes and wants to be a professional in that. One day, he'll be a great musician. These days, he also goes to the gym regularly. He takes fitness classes and in soon he'll be in great shape and he might be a very attractive athlete. In the Next year, he is going to propose to the girl which he loves. Soon he won't have any free time s enough. He might spend more time with his wife and he will be very busy!

May 22, 2015
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