Arthur 王昊烨
150523 - 日记 (一很短的) 你好朋友们。 谢谢你给我的帮助跟我的普通话!每天我了解一点儿多! 今天我没有很多时间因为我们一点儿忙。今天的早安我们参观了西安的城墙,骑了自行车 。 今天的天气很暖和。正在在青年旅舍的房顶给你写的日记! 我明天希望能写多。下次见! 亚瑟 typed - 5 minutes *** Hello friends, Thank you for helping me with my Chinese. I learn new things every day. Today I don't have much time because we've been a little busy. This morning we visited Xi'an's city walls and rode bicycles. The weather today is pleasantly warm. At the moment I'm writing this journal entry to you from the roof of the youth hostel. I hope to be able to write more tomorrow. See you next time! Arthur
May 23, 2015 7:04 AM
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150523 - 日记 (一很短的)

你好朋友们。

谢谢你给我的帮助跟我的普通话!(这句话读起来不顺畅,谢谢你对我普通话的帮助。每天我了解一点儿

今天我没有很多时间因为我们一点儿忙。今天的早(早安=good morning, 早上=this morning)我们参观了西安的城墙,骑了自行车 。

今天的天气很暖和。因为前面的主语是天气,这里不能缺主语)正在在青年旅舍的房顶给你写(“写”是句子的谓语,“的”一般是放在名词前面,例如,“美丽的风景”,此处要删去“的”,才能接上宾语日记!) 

我希望明天希望一些(文章)(希望放在面前会更顺畅一点,“多写一点(文章)/写多一点(文章)”都是可以的,)下次见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends,

Thank you for helping me with my Chinese. I learn new things every day.

Today I don't have much time because we've been a little busy. This morning we visited Xi'an's city walls and rode bicycles.

The weather today is pleasantly warm. At the moment I'm writing this journal entry to you from the roof of the youth hostel.

I hope to be able to write more tomorrow. See you next time!

Arthur

May 23, 2015

150523 - 日记 (一很短的)

你好朋友们。

谢谢你们给我的普通话给出了帮助!让我每天了解多一些!

今天我没有很多时间,因为我们有一点儿忙。今天早上我们参观了西安的城墙,还骑了自行车 。

今天的天气很暖和。现在在青年旅舍的房顶给你们写的日记!

我希望那天能多写点。下次见!

亚瑟

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Hello friends,

Thank you for helping me with my Chinese. I learn new things every day.

Today I don't have much time because we've been a little busy. This morning we visited Xi'an's city walls and rode bicycles.

The weather today is pleasantly warm. At the moment I'm writing this journal entry to you from the roof of the youth hostel.

I hope to be able to write more tomorrow. See you next time!

Arthur

May 23, 2015

150523 - 日记 (一很短的)

你好朋友们。 朋友们,你们好:

谢谢你(们)给我的帮助跟我的普通话(在普通话上给我的帮助,每天我了解一点儿多! (让我每天都能学到新的内容。)

今天我没有(太)多时间因为我们一点儿(有点儿)忙。今天的早安早上)我们参观了西安的城墙,骑了自行车。

今天的天气很暖和。(我)正在在青年旅舍的房顶给你(们)写日记!

明天希望希望明天能写多(一点)。下次见!

亚瑟

typed - 5 minutes

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Hello friends,

Thank you for helping me with my Chinese. I learn new things every day.

Today I don't have much time because we've been a little busy. This morning we visited Xi'an's city walls and rode bicycles.

The weather today is pleasantly warm. At the moment I'm writing this journal entry to you from the roof of the youth hostel.

I hope to be able to write more tomorrow. See you next time!

Arthur

May 23, 2015
Oh I am in Xi'an now as well! So hot these days :)
May 23, 2015

150523 - 日记 (一很短的)

你好朋友们。

谢谢你给我的帮助学习普通话!每天我了解一点儿

今天我没有很多时间学习因为我们点儿忙。今天的早我们参观了西安的城墙,骑了自行车 。

今天的天气很暖和。正在在青年旅舍的房顶给你写日记!

我明天希望能写多。下次见!

亚瑟

typed - 5 minutes

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Hello friends,

Thank you for helping me with my Chinese. I learn new things every day.

Today I don't have much time because we've been a little busy. This morning we visited Xi'an's city walls and rode bicycles.

The weather today is pleasantly warm. At the moment I'm writing this journal entry to you from the roof of the youth hostel.

I hope to be able to write more tomorrow. See you next time!

Arthur

May 23, 2015
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