Nathan
My Family Hi ! I'm getting myself ready for an exam, so don't hesitate to tell me everything I could write better! Thanks :) My family - I don't have a lot of family because I don't have any sibling or cousin. I have two grandparents who live in the same town as me so I can often visit them, and of course I live with my parents. Excepted them, I just have one oncle and one aunt, they used to live close to me but they moved out to the center of France. Therefore, I can't often see them, but I usually spend one or two weeks with them each summer holliday. I don't really mind not having a sibling because I've always lived this way but sometimes, I'd enjoy to have someone to talk to, because I'm not that close from my parents. Finally I've got a cat, Lulu, which is an important part of my family and I love her !
May 23, 2015 1:52 PM
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My Family

 

Hi !
I'm getting myself ready for an exam, so don't hesitate to tell me everything anything I could write better! Thanks :)

My family 

I don't have a lot of family because I don't have any siblings or cousins. I have two grandparents who live in the same town as me so I can often visit them, and of course I live with my parents.
Excepted Besides them, I just have one uncle and one aunt, they used to live close to me but they moved out to the center of France. Therefore So I can't often see them often, but I usually spend one or two weeks with them each during summer holliday.
I really don't really mind not having a sibling* because I've always lived this way, but sometimes, I'd enjoy like to have someone to talk to, because I'm not that close from with my parents.
Finally, I've got a cat, Lulu, which who is an important part of my family and I love her!

 

*Sibling does work, but sounds very formal, and out of place at that point in the writing. I would say "a brother or sister", and it compliments your writing, because you've already used sibling at the beginning, where it works fine. And always enjoy the family members you have!

May 23, 2015
Your story looks like my story. I've understood that you have a family and you don't have a family at the same time. It means you don't have a contact with them because each one has his/her own life. Me too, I have very nice family, but because of study, I am always far from them. You know , do you believe me if I say I like traveling and I hate it at the same time.On the one hand,I like traveling because the world is like a book.And, the more you travel, the more you read pages from the book of the world. On the other hand, I hate traveling because I am far from my family. Each time, I missed them so much
May 23, 2015
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