Is Increasing Petrol Price the Best Way to Solve Traffic and Pollution Problems?

The problems of Traffic and pollution from vehicles has become huge problems, both not only on cities city streets but also and on highways. Increasing petro prices will It is unlikely to solve anything.  最重要的要排頭 this problem simple through increasing the price of petrol.

It is undeniable that the uses of Private cars vehicles are the main causes of the increases in traffic and pollution. and Any higher petrol increase in price, pardon the pun, can dent so much of its can reduce the usage of private cars to some extent.  Sooner or later, things will return to their previous states.  while it would not control the number of drivers for long. As the policy However, this would also affect the daily commute costs and soon everything else will have their prices raised too, a pre-cursor to artificial inflation. the petrol price of buses, people who need to travel on the roads would be negatively affected by it. Therefore, the public policies must be considered carefully before jumping the gun.  and the government should think of some other methods that could be implemented to solve these problems.

In my opinion, to tackle the problem of serious pollution, the solution is to develop cleaner fuels, such as and electricity, should be developed powered transport. Actually, the technology is already available to produce electric cars, which are both quieter and cleaner to use. The manufacturers and travelers should be persuaded to adopt this new transportation tool as it would improve the air quality, Both the producer and consumer should be induced and be enticed into changing their mindset.  especially in large cities.

However, changing the type of provide cars cannot Even if all vehicles become electric powered, the problem in reducing traffic congestion will not be affected at all. It is like robbing Peter to pay Paul.  In order to do solve this, the government should improve on the choices of public transportation services available to people on the roads. If sufficient subways systems are built and effectively maintained in major cities, then the traffic congestion would be reduced dramatically. Long-distance coach and train services should also be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving car for people’s long journey.

Thus giving an inexpensive and affordable public transport is the biggest carrot to change people's driving habits.

In conclusions, long-term traffic and pollution reduction depend on educating people to use public transportation, and on government making sure public transportation systems constructed and run in an efficient way.

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