Bread and orange marmalade

My sister baked a loaf bread loaf of bread and made some orange marmalade to give to me. She is a fantastic cook. I love everything she makes and cooks. The bread smelled amazing. She used a lot of butter to bake it. And orange marmalade was wonderful as well. It wasn't too sweet. That's my taste. My another favourite orange marmalade is Tiptree one. Tiptree is also one of my favourite orange marmalades. These days, I've seen it in Japan I guess. Anyway, I think all the kinds of bread that my sister bakes are the best in the world.


This is very good! :)

Most of the changes that I made in red were just grammatical for written English.
Those changes are regularly ignored by native speakers in spoken conversation though. For instance, people will often say 'to give me' as you have used it.  

Also, you would normally say that you 'baked a loaf of bread', but you can also call the object a 'bread loaf'. 

Sentences highlighted in blue I was uncertain about.
Do you mean that your thoughts on the taste of your sister's marmalade is your own opinion?
And, do you mean that Tiptree marmalade is one of the favourite brands that you can find in Japan?


Well done once again! Your spelling is perfect. :) :)