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The Cripple of Inishmaan Act 2 + photo Please, correct my mistakes, thanks! The best or the funniest moments of the act: The best moment was, when Billy wearing a white dinner jacket sang and played on violin in Hollywood. He was a very good singer and he seemed to be very handsome guy. The funniest moment was, when Helen furiously threw eggs at Bartney. Helen wanted to become an actress, and she tried gracefully walk along the stage, but she didn’t chosen one. Billy always clumsily walked in the stage because he was invalid, his left leg and right arm was broken. Billy’s aunts always gently talked with him. Jimmy was a smug, because he thought his a very important person on the island. Aunts always affectionately spoke about Billy. Billy eagerly spoke about his life in the U.S. Billy shyly asked out Helen.
May 24, 2015 5:31 AM
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The Cripple of Inishmaan Act 2 + photo Please, correct my mistakes, thanks!
The best or the funniest moments of the act:

The best moment was, when Billy wearing a white dinner jacket sang and played on violin in Hollywood. He was a very good singer and he seemed to be very handsome guy.

The funniest moment was, when Helen furiously threw eggs at Bartney.

Helen wanted to become an actress, and she tried gracefully walking across the stage, but she wasn't chosen.

Billy always walked clumsily across the stage because he was an invalid, (disabled) his left leg and right arm was broken.

Billy’s aunts always talked gently with him.

Jimmy was smug , because he thought he was a very important person on the island.

The Aunts always spoke affectionately about Billy.

Billy eagerly spoke about his life in the U.S.

Billy shyly asked Helen out.

 

 

May 24, 2015
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