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Bill Gates Today I want to tell you about one of the richest and most successful people in the world, who called Bill Gates. His full name is Willam Henry Gates 3. He was born on 28th October 1955 in Seattle, USA. And he became a billionare when he was 31 years old, because he wrote software Microsoft. In school he was very intelligant, clever child and was good in Maths and Science. He began to use computers after he went in private school. Later he spending all of his time writing programs and learning computers. After finishing school he went to Harvard, but he did not graduate it. Because in that time Bill with his friend started Microsoft. One reason for his success is that Gates always been very ambitious and hardworking. He has not much time to personal life, but in 1994 he married Melinda French, and in 1995 wrote a best-selling book "The Road Ahead". For such rich person, his life is very simple. Also he is really generous. He has given huge amounts of money to charity, and going to give big part of his wealth when he will retire.
May 24, 2015 7:36 AM
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Bill Gates

Today I want to would like to tell you about one of the richest and most successful people in the world, who called Bill Gates. His full name is Willam Henry Gates III (The Third). He was born on 28th October 1955 in Seattle, USA, and he became a billionare when he was 31 years old due to the success of the software company he co-founded, Microsoft because he wrote software Microsoft.
In school he was very intelligent, clever child and was good in at Maths and Science. He began to use computers after he went in to private school. Later he spent spending all of his time writing programs and learning computers.
After finishing school, he went to Harvard, but he did not graduate it Bbecause in that time Bill, he and his friend started Microsoft. One reason for his success is that Gates he has always been very ambitious and hardworking.Consequently, he is a very busy man. Yet he still found the time to meet his future wife, Melinda French, who was an employee at Microsoft.  They later married in 1994, He has not much time to personal life, but in 1994 he married Melinda French, and in 1995 he wrote a best-selling book entitled "The Road Ahead".
For such rich person, his life is very simple. Also he is really very generous. He has given huge amounts of money to charity, and going to will give a big part of his wealth away after he retireswhen he will retire.


Small mistakes really, your English is excellent.

May 24, 2015
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May 24, 2015
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