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Housing I lived in a house and now I'm living in a flat. I have to admit that I prefer to live in a flat because it is smaller and easier to clean. Also, it is more comfortable and it hasn't stairs. Besides, supermarkets and shops are near. On the other hand, the houses are bigger and are further from the shops. But there is something that I love about the houses, the individual gardens. On my flat, I miss a terrace to sunbathe. I live in a flat. I live in an old flat, near the San Jorge beach. I love this area because around there are many shops, supermarkets and a lot of restaurants. There are also many gardens to walk, and most important of all, it is near of the beach and in summer it is fantastic. I'm still not sure how I want to be my dream house. But I know somethings, I want to live in a big flat with a lot of windows, of this way, I will have good views. And the building will have elevator and will not have stairs. Living in a rental house has many advantages and disadvantages. It is good because you aren't responsible if you break the furniture or the fridge and in anytime you can change of house. But it is bad because in my view is more expensive to live in a rent home because the money is lost. For live in a short time is better rent house, but for live always is better an own home. Buy a house is very expensive and you have to save a lot of money for that. In my country I think housing isn't affordable for everyone. Many people don't have jobs and cannot afford to buy a house. The houses should be cheaper for everyone.
May 24, 2015 4:54 PM
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Housing

I lived in a house and now I'm living in a flat. I have to admit that I prefer to live in a flat because it is smaller and easier to clean. Also, it is more comfortable and it hasn't stairs. Besides, supermarkets and shops are near. On the other hand, the houses are bigger and are further from the shops. But there is something that I love about the houses, the individual gardens. On In my flat, I miss a terrace to where I can sunbathe.

I live in a flat. I live in an old flat, near the San Jorge beach. I love this area because around there are many shops, supermarkets and a lot of restaurants closeby. There are also many gardens to walk in, and most important of all, it is near to of the beach and in summer it is fantastic.

I'm still not sure how I want  my dream home house to be . But I know that somethings, I want to live in a big flat with a lot of windows, of this way, I will have good views. And The building must will have an elevator and will not have stairs.

Living in a rental house has many advantages and disadvantages. It is good because you aren't responsible if you break the furniture or the fridge and at in anytime you can change of house. But it is bad because in my view it's more expensive to live in a rented home because the money is lost/wasted. For live in A short term rental time is better rent house, but it is always better to own your own home.for live always is better an own home.

Buy A house is very expensive to buy and you have to save a lot of money first for that. In my country I think housing isn't affordable for everyone. Many people don't have jobs and cannot afford to buy a house. The Houses should be cheaper so for everyone can afford one.

May 24, 2015

Housing

I lived in a house and now I'm living in a flat. I have to admit that I prefer to live in a flat because it is smaller and easier to clean. Also, it is more comfortable and it hasn't *1 stairs. Besides, supermarkets and shops are near. On the other hand, *2 The houses are bigger and are further from the shops. But *3 there is something that I love about the houses, the individual gardens. On my flat, I miss the terrace to sunbathe.

I live in a flat. I live in an old flat, near the San Jorge Beach *4. I love this area because around there are many shops, supermarkets and a lot of restaurants. There are also many gardens to walk, and most important of all, it is near of the beach and in summer it is fantastic.

I'm still not sure how I want my dream house to be. But I know somethings. I want to live in a big flat with a lot of windows, of this way, I will have good views. And the building will have an elevator and will not have stairs.

Living in a rental house has many advantages and disadvantages. It is good because you aren't responsible if you break the furniture or the fridge and in anytime you can change of house *5. But it is bad because in my view it is more expensive to live in a rental home because the money is lost. For live in a short time is better rent house*6; but for live always is better an own home.*7

Buying a house is very expensive and you have to save a lot of money for that. In my country I think housing isn't affordable for everyone. Many people don't have jobs and cannot afford to buy a house. The houses should be cheaper for everyone.

 

*1 = "it hasn't any stairs" <em>or "</em>it doesn't have any stairs<em>"</em>

<em>*2 = </em>"On the other hand" similar to "on the contrary" would support  living in a house. However, you explain a disadvantage of living in the house (further from the shops). 

*3 = This is where " On the other hand" could be used, because you are explaining why you like the house. 

*4 = Beach is capitalized because it is a proper noun. Landmarks, places of recognition are capitalized. Ex: I saw the tower. I saw the Eiffel Tower.

*5 = Otra manera de decirlo: ....fridge and you can <em>move </em>to another house anytime.

*6 = "Living for a short time, a rental house is better;" <em>or "</em> To live for a short time, a rental house is better;"

*7 = ";but to always live in,  it is better to own a home." <em>or "</em>;but to live permanently it is better to own a home."

May 24, 2015
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