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الخبز السلام عليكم. اليوم انا اريد ان اكتب على الحبر. اعجبني الحبر كثيرا و انا اعرف السبب ذالك. بيتي يوجد طولى الطريق في توجد الممكن فيه يفعل الحبر. حيث انا طفل انا ذهبت الى هذه المكن في كل اليوم لحبزه. الان انا اعجب الخبز لاكن في كاءسى هذه . Hi! Today I would like to write about bread. I like bread to much and I know why. My house is on the street where there is the place where is produced bread. When I was a child I went to that place every day for its breads. Now I like bread because in my mind there is that.
May 24, 2015 6:19 PM
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الخبز

السلام عليكم. اليوم أريد أن أكتب عن الخبز. يعجبني/ أحب الخبز كثيرا وأنا اعرف سبب ذالك.
بيتي في شارع يوجد فيه مخبز. عندما كنت طفلة اعتدت الذهاب إلى هذا المكان/ المخبز في كل اليوم لأجل خبزه. الآن أنا أحب الخبز لأنه يذكرني بذلك.



Hi!
Today I would like to write about bread.
I like bread to much and I know why.
My house is on the street where there is the place where is produced bread. When I was a child I went to that place every day for its breads.
Now I like bread because in my mind there is that.

 

Stefanie: <em>I didn't understand your last sentence so I wrote it like that: "Now I like bread because it reminds me of that", I hope this is what you meant. I love bread too :)</em>

May 24, 2015
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الخبز

السلام عليكم. اليوم أنا أريد أن أكتب عن الخُبز. يُعجبني الخبز كثيرا و انا اعرف سبب ذلك.
بيتي يوجد في نفس الطريق أَيْنَ توجد الممكن فيه يفعل يُصْنَعُ الخُبز. عِنْدَما كُنْتُ طفلة انا ذهبت الى ذلك المكان في كل يوم لخُبزِه. الان أنا أحبُّ الخبز لاَنَّهُ مازالَ في ذاكِرَتي.

في نفس الطريق = in the same street
مازالَ في ذاكِرَتي = It's still in my memories

 


Hi!
Today I would like to write about bread.
I like bread to much and I know why.
My house is on the street where there is the place where is produced bread. When I was a child I went to that place every day for its breads.
Now I like bread because in my mind there is that.

May 24, 2015

الخبز

السلام عليكم. اليوم اريد ان اكتب على الخبر. احب الخبر كثيرا و انا اعرف سبب ذلك بيتي يوجد على طريق يوجد فيه مكان يصنع الخبر. عندما كنت طفل ذهبت الى هذا المكان كل يوم لأجل خبزه. الان انا احب الخبز لأنه في ذهني ه 




Hi!
Today I would like to write about bread.
I like bread to much and I know why.
My house is on the street where there is the place where is produced bread. When I was a child I went to that place every day for its breads.
Now I like bread because in my mind there is that.

May 26, 2015

الخبز

السلام عليكم. اليوم أنا أريد أن أكتب عن الخبز ،يعجبني الخبز كثيرا ،انا اعرف السبب لأنه يوجد على طريق بيتي مخبز. حيث عندما كنت طفلة أذهب إليه كل اليوم. و الآن أنا أحب الخبز  



Hi!
Today I would like to write about bread.
I like bread to much and I know why.
My house is on the street where there is the place where is produced bread. When I was a child I went to that place every day for its breads.
Now I like bread because in my mind there is that.

May 24, 2015
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