Ann
MY aloe is blooming Put a basin of Aloe on the window sill Think of watering Remember to see her The wind comes from her. The heat she only endure Lead a child like life Never had her great expectations But accidentally discovered She stretched out a long. Out of many orange flowers Head down. So humble So gratitude The heart was shocked by her hard The glory of life is to rely on their own for And not others can save the
May 25, 2015 4:50 AM
Corrections · 1
This is a very nice poem. Its not to easy to really make any corrections to poems, as they are , by their nature not grammatically correct. Maybe others can comment on this. The poem is very nice !!
May 25, 2015
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