Damien Jeong
promote my favorite movie #1 Hello everyone, my name is Uihyun-Jeong. today im going to promote a movie which one of my favorite. Are you guys know which country make most many movies per year in the world? perhaps the Hollywood in united.states? no answers is a Bollywood in india. Have you ever heard about Bollywood? Bollywood is a bombay+hollywood it's a compound word. refer to Indian movie industry. #2 one of my favorite movies also a bollywood movie named 3idiots. it's very famous one so probably half of you guys must be already saw it. but if anyone didn't see yet this movie. I going to positively recommend this movies. #3 Let me introduce summarizing the story. movie's background is college of Engineering, famous university in India. the main character is this three guys. he name is "Farhan" he want to be a photographer but he father is very strict and make him being a "engineer". so he afraid of his father coming to college of engineering. his name is “Raju” he's family very poor so he has a lot of responsibillity and want to getting a job in major company. and last guys name is "Rancho". He thinlk follow dream is most important so oppose some teachers who force to student just concentrate on getting a good grade and getting a job in the major company. this movie portrait this three guys follows their dream and youth, life's value. #4 why am I crazy about this movie? have three reasons. first, I can feel sympathy the background of this movie is a india. india also have enthusiastic education environment like Korea. in korea usually most of university student just tried to getting a good job including me. one I hate this and I want to follow my dream but problem is I don't have any dream and I didn't think about this kind of problems. after that I have been tried what is am I rally like and enjoy things? even though I still thking about what is exactly I like things but I found basic things about my life. this movie killing message also when people do they really want to do is a most brilliant success in life. so I gained a sympathy and made me comfort from this movie. #5 second, I love the main character. when 란초 have a problem he always said "all is well" it means evertthing gonna be all right something like that. actually although I tried to always be positive bit im not a very positive person. after I saw this movie I have been tried to more positive in every part. #6 and third thing is I love musical things in india movie. yuu know most big feature of bollywood m
May 25, 2015 11:20 AM
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#4
Why am I crazy about this movie? I have three reasons.
First, I can feel sympathy (This sentence is incomplete, you need to add in what you feel sympathy for) Ex. I sympathize with the characters.
The background setting of this movie is a in India. India also have has a enthusiastic (perhaps 'strict' or 'rigorous', it's difficult for me to guess what adjective you were going for) education environment like Korea. In Korea, usually most of university students usually just try to getting a good job, including me. one I hate this and I want to follow my dreams, but the problem is that I don't have any dream and I didn't think about never considered this kind of problems. After that (by 'that', do you mean the movie? If yes, you need to state that you are talking about the movie, for example... After watching this movie, I really started to wonder what kinds of things I really like and would enjoy doing.  I have been tried what is am I rally like and enjoy things? Even though I am still thinking about what it is that I really enjoy, I think I have discovered... (I can't finish this sentence because I don't know what you mean by 'things,' you have to be more specific. This is my best guess but please try to finish the sentence by yourself if I don't say what you mean.) ...what I want most in life. is exactly I like things but I found basic things about my life .
This movie's killing fundamental message also is that when people do what they really want enjoy most, to do is a most brilliant they have the greatest success in life. so Therefore, I gained a sympathy and made me comfort from this movie.
#5
Secondly, I love the main character.
When 란초 had a problem, he always said "all is well" it which means everything is gonna going to ('gonna' is in the dictionary as a contraction of 'going to', but it is very informal. I would never use it in any essay or formal work. I only ever use it with friends. Feel free to use it in speech, but I would avoid it in writing. It seems to be gaining popularity but it is not quite there yet, at least from what I've seen.) be all right, or something like that. Actually, although I try to always be positive, bit I'm not a very positive person. After I saw this movie, I have been trying to be more positive... in every part. (again, you need to add more information in sentences where the reader doesn't know what exactly you're talking about. Every part of what?)
#6
and (Never begin a sentence with 'and', it looks sloppy. Other conjunctions such as 'but' or 'because' shouldn't begin sentences either in most case. Those two can be used under certain circumstances but that might be a little too advanced for you right now. My advice is to just avoid it. The third thing is I love musical things in india movie that I love about Indian movies are musicals. yuu know most big feature of bollywood m (This sentence is incomplete, I don't know how to correct it)


May 26, 2015

promote my favorite movie Promoting my favorite movie. 

#1
Hello everyone, my name is Uihyun-Jeong. Today I'm going to promote a movie which is one of my favorites.
Are Do you guys know which country makes the most many movies per year in the world? Perhaps the Hollywood in the Unites States? No, the answer is a Bollywood in India. Have you ever heard about of Bollywood? Bollywood is a Bombay+Hollywood it's a compound word. It refers to the Indian movie industry.
#2
One of my favorite movies also is a Bollywood movie named titled 3 Idiots. It's a very famous one so probably at least half of you guys must be have already saw seen it. but if anyone didn't see yet this movie. I going to positively recommend this movies. But if anyone hasn't already seen this movie, I would highly recommend it.
#3
Let me introduce summarize the story. movie's background is college of Engineering, famous university in India.  The movie takes place at a famous engineering college in India.
The main characters is this are three guys. The first one's name is he name is Farhan and he wants to be a photographer, but his father is very strict and make him being a about him becoming an engineer. No quotations needed for the word engineer. so His afraid of his father coming to college of engineering. so he attends engineering college.
his name is The second one is named Raju. (again, no quotations needed for names) he's His family is very poor so he has a lot of responsibillity and wants to getting a job in a major company. and Finally, the last guy's name is Rancho. (No quotations) He believes that following his dream is the most important thing so he opposes some teachers who force to students to just concentrate on getting a good grades and getting a job in the a major company.
This movie portrays these three guys following their dreams, as well as youth, and life's values. and youth, life's value.

May 26, 2015
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