mirco
Facebook and restaurant. It's about one month yet that I stopped with facebbok because I find myself using so much time on it. Yesterday I went out to the restaurant and I didn't take out my smartphone from my poket thus I started to look around me to the other people who was waiting for food. I was surprised by a table with Dad, Mom and son. Both parents was abducted by their smartphones and their son was sitting looking them. It's made me wondering what is gone wrong in our society.
May 25, 2015 4:17 PM
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Facebook and restaurant. And Restaurant


It's been about one month yet that since I stopped with facebbok Facebook because I find found myself using spending so much time on it.
Yesterday, I went out to the restaurant and I didn't take out my smart phone from my poket pocket, thus I started to look around me to at the other people who was were waiting for food.
I was surprised by a table with a Dad dad, Mom mom, and son. Both parents was were distracted abducted by their smart phones and their son was sitting looking at them. It's made me wondering wonder what is has gone wrong in our society.


Nice job Mirco, I only noted a few minor grammar issues is all. Please let me know if you have any questions.

May 25, 2015
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