Paula YA
The Bug I hate In the Summer well~ Now it's midnight , and I felt so boring , so I decide to writing something funny . The is summer in Taiwan now , and lots of bugs will go out and say hello to you , then u may scared from them and wanna kill them ! I hate cockroach , they are the most evil and ugly insect in the world , but even in the winter , they also go out and say the freaking hello to you !!! Now our dining room have a big cockroach on the ground , and I crossed it by my naked foot ,it let me said 幹!!(it's mean fuck ) , I dare not to leave my room ....but worry it may come to my room . AHHHHHHHH!!!! Another nausea (噁心的)bug is BIG FLY , don't doubt me , it's ''BIG'' fly . I don't know how fly big in other countries , but mine is as big as bee ...... yeah ... is bee .( 幹.....) The huge fly was flying in my room yesternight , and it flap sound made me mad , it's very disgusting , it fly to hit wall several times , damn it ! freaking noisy ! Then I use my drumstick as arrow to shoot Big fly , but I failed , and I kneeled on my bed thinking : 幹..... How can I so stupid to fighting with a fly and I can't even kill it !!!! Then I use my perfume as insectcide , but the fly still stand on the wall and laugh at me . Finally I kill it by a paper , to hit it as fast as I can . I told this experience to Chris , and He laughed so long ~~~Maybe he image my action was stupid , wwwwww I am silly I sure that ! Anyway ,I hate Summer , and Bugs . Btw , I found that I learn about describe ugly and disgusting thing's word too short , can you give me some new words or slang ?
May 25, 2015 7:03 PM
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The Bug I Hate in the Summer

Well~ It's midnight now, and I am bored, so I decided to write something funny.

It's Summer in Taiwan and there are lots of bugs that come out. They may scare you, and you might want to kill them!
I hate cockroaches! They are the most evil and ugly insect in the world! but Even in the winter they come out and say the freaking hello to you!!! Now our dining room has a big cockroach on the ground , and I stepped on it with my bare foot. It made me say 幹!!(it's means fuck) , I do not dare leave my room.... I'm worried it might come in my room. AHHHHHHHH!!!!


Another nausea bug, 噁心的, bug is a BIG FLY! Don't doubt me, it's huge.

I don't know how big flies are in other countries, but mine is as big as bee ...... yeah ... is bee .( 幹.....) The huge fly was flying in my room last night, and its buzzing made me mad. It's very annoying. It flew into the wall several times. Damn it! It's freaking noisy!

Then I used my drumstick as arrow to shoot the big fly, but I failed. and I kneeled on my bed thinking: 幹..... How can I as stupid as to fighting with a fly? I can't even kill it!!!! Then I used my perfume as insectcide, but the fly still stayed on the wall and laughed at me.

Finally, I killed it with a paper. to hit it as fast as I can . I shared this experience with Chris , and He laughed so long ~~~ Maybe he thought my action was stupid, wwwwww I am silly I sure that !

Anyway, I hate Summer and bugs.

Btw, I found out that the words I use to describe ugly and disgusting thing's word are too short, can you give me some new words or slang?

 

TIPS: Do not put a space before punctuation. Never have a space before things like ! , . ?

Some words that mean the same as ugly and disgusting are awful, grotesque, hideous, horrid, revolting, gross, appalling, repulsive, and unsightly.

May 25, 2015
哈哈哈哈真的!我事後回想還是覺得我的舉動怎麼這麼荒唐! 可是那隻蒼蠅真的大得驚人!我以為牠吃了nuclear waste 哈哈哈哈
May 28, 2015
哈哈, 這故事讓我笑. Your really story is really funny. :)
May 27, 2015
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