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report During the report, Bob showed us a pencil, and he said that it was a legal thing such cars ,books and so on. Next, he showed us a monkeys' picture, and he said that they were legal things too. Then, he broke the pencil and he said that he could do whatever he wanted with these legal things. The picture showed how they looked like when they were orphans. After ,he reported that for centuries, there was a legal war which separated legal things from legal persons. On one hand, the legal things are invisible to judge,they do not count in law and have not any legal rights. On the other side,there are the legal persons who are the opposite compared to the legal things. Thus, he wanted to say that nowadays all human animals are legal things and all human beings are legal persons. Hence,he affirmed that human and legal persons are not synonyms. Finally,he claimed that human animals should be like legal persons.
May 25, 2015 10:11 PM
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During the report, Bob showed us a pencil, and he said that it was a legal thing like such cars, books and so on*. Next, he showed us a monkey's picture, and he said that they were legal things too. Then, he broke the pencil and he said that he could do whatever he wanted with these legal things. The picture showed how they looked like when they were orphans. After that, he reported that for centuries, there was a legal war which separated legal things from legal people persons. On one hand, the legal things are impossible invisible to judge, they do not count in law and don't have not any legal rights. On the other side, there are the legal peoplepersons who are the opposite of compared to the legal things. Thus, he wanted to say that nowadays all humans animals are legal things and all human beings are legal people persons. Hence, he affirmed that human and legal people persons are not synonyms. Finally, he claimed that human beings animals should be like legal people persons.

 

*In English, we put a space after we use a comma. However, we don't put a space before we use the comma.

^The word for more than one person is "people"

May 25, 2015
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