formal e-mail

I would like to ask you correct it naturally and politely. If I should add some sentences, please let me know.

Dear XXX,

Thank you for your impressive  discussion in Fukuoka.
I am XXX. I talked with you at coffer break time and the party on the beach?. It was wonderful to meet you.
Although our major is different, I believe our big hope is the same. I would like to realise my dream by taking part in UN internship.
Could you advise me and give me some information?

I would really appreciate your help

Best regards,

Naomichi