Mathieu
Schedule I decided this morning to read at least one hour every day. I want to improve my reading speed because I begin the university in September which means I will have to read more. So, if I read too slow it will be difficult to read everything on time. Furthermore, it is not only read the text, I will have to take notes from what I will read therefore if I read slowly I will never be able to follow. Also, I try to organize my time better for the same reason. The amount of work will be huge and I want good marks. Therefore If my organisation is not good I won't be able to do everything on time. I will try to make a schedule and apply it. Of course, the most difficult is to apply the schedule but I have to get used to it otherwise it will be difficult if my organisation and my time managing are not effective. It will help to improve my language skills too. For example, if I write everyday in English,German and Spanish I will learn much faster.
May 26, 2015 2:41 PM
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Schedule

I decided This morning I decided (1) to read for at least one hour every day. I want to improve my reading speed because I begin (2) the university in September which means I will have to read more. So, If I read too slow it will be difficult to read everything on time. Furthermore, it is not only reading the text, I will have to take notes from what I will have read. Therefore, if I read slowly I will never be able to follow (3). Also, I am trying to organize my time better for the same reason. The amount of work will be huge and I want good marks. Therefore if my organisation is not good I won't be able to do everything on time. I will try to make a schedule and apply it (4). Of course, the most difficult is to apply (5) the schedule but I have to get used to it, otherwise it will be difficult if my organisation and my time managing management are not effective. It will help to improve my language skills too. For example, if I write everyday in English, German and Spanish I will learn much faster.

 

(1) "This morning I decided..." sounds more natural than "I decided this morning to read"

(2) "start" as an alternative to "begin"

(3) "keep up" as an alternative to "follow"

(4) "stick to it" has a better meaning than "apply it"

(5) "stick to" instead of "apply"

May 26, 2015
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