lazy man today i get a phone call. the other side of the phone is a man, he ask me the following three questions. 1.how often do you use englis in your daily life? 2.Among listening, speaking, readi

Belinda

lazy man today i get a phone call. the other side of the phone is a man, he ask me the following three questions. 1.how often do you use englis in your daily life? 2.Among listening, speaking, reading, writing which do you want to improve most? 3.What problem do you have in learning english? Firstly, i tell him because i didn't learn grammer at the begining of my english study noe have i learn spelling. But he told me, all is my excuse. After think over and over again, i agree with him, all is not problem . The only reason is because i am a lazy girl. Though i consinder to improve english many times in my mind, i never take action.

May 27, 2015 6:28 AM

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Lazy Man /Girl

Today I received (get) a phone call from (. the other side of the phone is) a man who asked (, he ask) me the following three questions.
1. How often do you use English (englis) in your daily life?
2. Among listening, speaking, reading (,) and writing, which do you want to improve the most?
3. What problems do you have in learning English?

Firstly, I told (tell) him (because) I didn't learn grammar (grammer) at the beginning (begining) of my English study, nor did I (noe have i) learn spelling.
He (But he) told me it was just (, all is) my excuse. After I thought about it (think) over and over, I had to agree with him. (again, i agree with him, all is not problem .) The only reason for my English level is because I am a lazy girl. Although I considered improving my (Though i consinder to improve) English many times in my mind, I never took (take) action.

Your actual sentence construction is good - words are in the right order - but you do need to pay attention to spelling and verb tenses, as you say. You should use past tense in this article.

May 27, 2015

Lazy girl

Today i got a phone call. the other side of the phone was a man. He asked me the following three questions.
1.how often do you use english in your daily life?
2.Among listening, speaking, reading, writing which do you want to improve most?
3.What problem do you have in learning english?

Firstly, i told him because i didn't learn grammar at the begining of my english study noe have i learn spelling.????
But he told me, all is my excuse. After over and over again, i agreed with him, all is not problem . The only reason is because i am a lazy girl. Though i considered to improve english many times in my mind, i never take action.