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Life is too short. So kiss slowly, smile *too much, and *excuse so fast.
I have lived a very terrible, sad life, worried about everythings. *I hadn't anyone friends. I hadidn't smile, *no conversation, did not go out. I lived like a machine - sleep, get up, eat, 'hug laptop' and sleep again.
But now, I have found a goal of in my life. My life is of for myself. No one have has the power to affect to my life. I want to smile more than, I want to do everythings I like. I won't *see the trait judgments of the way people to live, I won't make will be happy with the most simplest things. I'm a girl, I'm 22 years old, and I don't want to waste any a single minute of my life.
Thank you God for my life! I won't *make you disappointedment *because of creating me.
*smile a lot
*forgive yourself, don't feel guilty
*I did not have any friends
*didn't talk to people
*hear the comments/criticism of others about the way I live
*I won't disappoint you
*in creating me
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Life is too short. So kiss slowly, smile too so much and excuse so fast.
I have had lived very terrible terribly, sad sadly and worry worried about everythings. I hadn't didn't have anyone any friend. I hadn't didn't smile, had no conversation, no didn't go out. I lived like a machine - sleep, get up, eat, hug laptop and sleep again slept, got up, surfed the Net and slept again (haha "ôm laptop" is only a phrase we Vietnamese use to describe "using laptop to surf or work" but foreigners can't know about that so you shouldn't translate word by word like that. They can think that you really hug a laptop :D)
But now, I found the goal of my life. My life is of myself mine. No one have power is able to affect to my life. I want to smile more than, I want to do everythings I like. I won't see trait of people to live I will live in the way I like and won't care about how other people think of, I won't make happy happiness with the most simple things (why not? Simple things can make senses in many cases). I'm a girl, I'm 22 years old. And I don't want to waste any minute of my life.
Thank God for my life! I won't make you disappointment disappointed because of creating me for your support.
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Life is too short. So kiss slowly, laugh hard, and accept all apology.
I have lived very terrible, sad and worried life, I had no friends to smile, to talk and to go out with. I lived like a machine - sleep, get up, eat, hug laptop and sleep again.
But now, I found out a goal for my life. My life is of myself. No one got power to affect it. I want to smile more and do things I like. I won't judge people. Simple things didn't use to give me happiness. I'm a 22-year-old girl and I don't want to waste any minute of life from now.
Thanks God for giving me this life and from now on you will never regret of giving me this wonderful life.
