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my firts time hello, yesterday for me was a great day. After long time I finally found a work. For me it will be new experience because I never worked in this area. I am only little sad because I can't stay this summer with my children. I very hope that this website could help me to impove my English. I my new work I need to speak this language and sometimes I have some problem to explain what I want. So, I try to write something every day, so that you will know me better. And I hope that sometimes somebody could correct my not perfect English
May 27, 2015 4:16 PM
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My first time

Hello.

It was a great day for me yesterday. I finally got a job after a long time of searching for one.

It will be a whole/a totally new experience for me as I have never worked in this field before.

I am only little sad because, this summer, I won't (will not) be able to spend much time with my children.

I very much hope that I will be able to impove my English through Italki. In my new job I need to speak English, too but sometimes I have some problems expressing myself. Thus, I will try to write something every day, so that you will get to know me better. And I hope (here you could say "wish" insted of "hope" so that you avoid being repetitive) that there will be people who will correct my imperfect English.

 

That was a sweet entry! Break a leg Victoira! :-)

May 27, 2015
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my firts time

hello, yesterday for me was a great day. After <em>a</em> long time I <em>have</em> finally found a work. For me it will be <em>a</em> new experience because I <em>have</em> never worked in this area. I am only <em>a</em> little sad because I <em>won't be able to spend</em> this summer with my children. I hope <em>very much</em> that this website could help me to improve my English. I<em>n</em> my new work I need to speak this language and sometimes I have some problem to explain what I want <em>to say</em>. So, I <em>will</em> try to write something every day, so that you will know me better. And I hope that sometimes somebody could correct my not <em>so</em> perfect English

May 27, 2015
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