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Describing a Moroccan City "Ouarzazate": Ouarzazate Is a Moroccan city, located in the southern-central in the Kingdom of Morocco, and named "The door of the desert ". This place is considered as very attractive place, which is visited by many tourist from over the world, and may international cinematographic productions choose this place to make there movies. because of the Morocco's biggest studios that exist in this area. Many films have been made in "Ouarzazate" such as: Lawrence of Arabia (1962), The Mummy (1999), Gladiator (2000), Kingdom of Heaven (2005),.... a UNESCO World Heritage Site noted for many clay made Kasbahs.
May 27, 2015 7:55 PM
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Describing a Moroccan City "Ouarzazate":

Ouarzazate is [*capitalization] a Moroccan city, located in the southern-central in the Kingdom of Morocco and named ["called" is more idiomatic"The door of the desert." 

This place It is considered as a very attractive ["beautiful" is more idiomatic] place, which and is visited by many tourist from over the world.  Many [spelling error?] international cinematographic productions choose this place to make there [*must use "their"] movies there [instead of saying 'this place], because many of the Morocco's biggest studios that exist in this area.

 

**[this last phrase is a little clunky.  I would write someting like "It is a popular location for shooting movies because many of Morocco's biggest studios are located in the area."]

Many films have been made in Ouarzazate [don't need the quotation "" marks] such as <em>Lawrence of Arabia</em> (1962), <em>The Mummy</em> (1999), <em>Gladiator</em> (2000), <em>Kingdom of Heaven</em> (2005), among many more.  

It is also a UNESCO World Heritage Site, noted for its many clay made Kasbahs.

May 27, 2015
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