Lisanne
La mudanza Yo y mi familia vamos mudarse acerca de siete semanas. Ella es una casa pequeña pero tiene un jardín grande. Allí debe mucho ha cultivado. Nosotros debemos vivir en una tienda en la jardín hastra que la reconstrucción es listo. Thanks for reading. This was very difficult. I'll write an easier text next time. Could you give me an explanation of my mistakes?
May 27, 2015 8:35 PM
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La Mudanza

 

Mi familia y yo vamos a mudarnos dentro de siete semanas. La casa es pequeña, pero tiene un jardín grande. Allí se pueden hacer muchos cultivos. Nosotros debemos vivir en una tienda en el jardín hastra que la remodelación esté lista.

Thanks for reading. This was very difficult. I'll write an easier text next time. Could you give me an explanation of my mistakes? :)

May 28, 2015
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La mudanza

Yo y mi familia nos vamos mudar acerca aproximadamente en de siete semanas. (vamos A it is the same as say I am going TO, so you can't omit it. Regarding "nos" you have used the verb "ir" and in this case you should have used "irse".

Ella Es una casa pequeña pero tiene un jardín grande. There is not a third person singular in Spanish to refers to things or animals, so you must omit it or change the order "La casa es pequeña..."

Allí debe de haber muchos cultivos. (I'm not sure what did you want to say here)

Nosotros debemos tendremos que vivir en una tienda en la el jardín hastra que la reconstrucción es lista. ("jardín" is masculine so you must use "el", "lista" is refered to reconstrucción and it is feminine and in Spanish adjectives have gender . With "debemos" you are saying that you shoud, but what you are really trying to say it is that you will have to (there is not other choice). "Es" is present of indicative and you need present of subjunctive "esté".

Thanks for reading. This was very difficult. I'll write an easier text next time. Could you give me an explanation of my mistakes?

Sorry, but I can't be more accurate with the explanation, in the mayority of the cases I just know how it is although I can't know how. I truly expect that it can be useful for you!

May 27, 2015
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La mudanza

Yo y mi familia nos vamos mudarse acerca dentro de siete semanas.

Ella Es una casa pequeña pero tiene un jardín grande.

Allí deben haber muchos ha cultivos.

Nosotros debemos vivir en una tienda en la el jardín hastra hasta que la reconstrucción este lista.

Thanks for reading. This was very difficult. I'll write an easier text next time. Could you give me an explanation of my mistakes?

 

May 27, 2015
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