Alex
My first writing Hello My name is Alex. I'm from Spain. I´m archaeologist. I graduated two years ago and I'm waiting a scholarship to do my PhD about animal in the archaeological sites. I'm in italki because I want to improve my listening and speaking skills with English. I don't have problem with reading and I can defend with writing, but I would like to speak with people around of globe. I could help them with their Spanish. If you want to make language exchange, you could add me. Now, my level is B1 (I have the PET exam tomorrow), but I want to improve every day, because I need English for my future, Thank you for reading
May 27, 2015 9:47 PM
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My first writing

Hello
My name is Alex. I'm from Spain. I'm an archaeologist. I graduated two years ago and I'm waiting for news about? (unclear exactly what you mean) a scholarship to do my PhD about animals found in archaeological sites. I'm on italki because I want to improve my listening and speaking skills in English. I don't have problem with reading and I can defend(?) with writing, but I would like to speak with people around the globe. I could help them with their Spanish. If you want to do a language exchange, you could add me. Now, my level is B1 (I have the PET exam tomorrow), but I want to improve every day, because I need English for my future,
Thank you for reading

 

The (?) is where i didn't understand what you're trying to say and needs a better word because it doesn't make sense. Overall though it's very clear. There are ways some parts could have been phrased better but there's no point in correcting that sort of stuff until you're very advanced. Well done!

May 27, 2015
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