My <em>teenage</em> years

When I was fifteen (and during all my teenage <em>years</em>) while was in the school I was a good student, <em>and</em> I didn't give <em>(any)</em> trouble to my parents.
I was quiet but also <em>a</em> perfectionist in the technical drawing. I made lamins <em>for</em> my classmates and they <em>paid/would pay</em> me anything, like money or food at recess.

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My tennage  teenage years

When I was fifteen and throughout my  during all my teenage years while was in the school I was a good student. then I  didn't wouldn't give trouble to my parents any issues. 

I was quiet but also a perfectionist when it came to  in the technical drawing. I would make something called  made 'lamins' from for my classmates and they would pay me with anything. Sometimes they could give me  like money or food at during recess.

My teenage years

When I was fifteen and during all my teenage in the school I was a good student.I didn't give any trouble to my parents.
I was reticent [who remains queit] but good in the technical drawing. I used to make lamins for my classmates and in return they gave me money or food during recess time.

My teenage years

When I was fifteen and during (all) my teenage years while I was in the at school, I was a good student, and (then) I didn't give my parents any trouble to.*
I was quiet, but also a perfectionist in the technical drawing. I made laminates from for my classmates and they pay paid me at recess anything, like with money or food.

*we say  'I didn't give them any trouble'