My Family Rules
You will find that families often have their (It is certain that each family has its) own rules and customs which they abide by. Rules can help family members to get along better and make the family become more close knit. (closer and closer.) Mine has a few, especially for me since (as) I am in my final year at high school. First, I am not (now) allowed / permitted to watch much television, except for when I have finished all my homework and exercises. (And) Scarcely will (scarely do) my parents let me stay up (so) late at night. Second, I am not permitted / allowed (don't have a permission) to use a computer or a smart phone, apart from for study purposes. Moreover, my parents rarely let me go out with friends except on special occasions, such as for (there is necessary cases,) birthdays or funerals, for example. Third, I must follow my strict diet to keep myself healthy and mentally alert (sagacious) for the coming University Entrance Examination. One blessing is that (Futhermore,) I do not have to do household chores because my parents want to facilitate my study. ( studying.) All in all, my family rules help me to raise my awareness of discipline (,) and I can safely say that they have (has) made me a better person.
Very well written. Your article flows well and your grammar is fine. I have suggested a few amendments / other options you might use.
My Family Rules
It is certain that each family has its own rules.Rules can help family members get along better and make family closer and closer. Mine has a few, especially for me as I am in my final year at in high school. Firstly, I am now not allowed to watch much a lot of television except when until I have finished all my homework and exercises. And scarely Rarely do my parents let me stay up so late at night. Secondly, I don't have a permission to use a computer or a smartphone apart from study purposes. Moreover, my parents rarely let me go out with friends, except when there is are necessary cases, such as birthdays or funerals, for example. Thirdly, I must follow my strict diet to keep myself healthy and sagacious for the coming University Entrance Examination. Furthermore, I do not have to do household chores because my parents want to facilitate my studying. All in all, my family rules help me to raise my awareness of discipline,. I can say that they has have made me a better person.
My Family's Rules
It is certain that each family has its own rules. Rules can help family members get along better and make bring a family closer and closer together. Mine My family has a few rules, especially for me, as I am in my final year at of high school. First, I am not allowed to watch much television except when I have finished all my homework and exercises. And scarely do My parents rarely let me stay up so very late at in the night. Second, I don't have a permission to use a computer or a smart phone, apart from studying purposes. Moreover, my parents rarely let me go out with friends, except there is for necessary cases, birthdays or funerals for example. Third, I must follow my strict diet to keep myself healthy and sagacious for the coming university entrance examination. Futhermore, I do not have to do any household chores because my parents want to facilitate my studying. All in all, my family's rules help me to raise my awareness of discipline. I can say that they have made turned me into a better person.
My Family Rules
It is certain that each family has their own rules. Rules can help family members get along better and make families become closer.
Alternative: Rules can help family members get along better and make the family bond better.
their -chúng ta không dụng "nó " (it) trong tiếng Anh khi nói về gia đình.
a lot of television sounds natural when speaking. When writing, you can keep "much television"
Mine has a few, especially for me as I am in my final year in high school. First, I am now allowed to watch a lot television except when I have finished all my homework and exercises.
Alternative: I can watch as much television after I finished/completed all my homework and excerises.
And scarely do my parents let me stay up so late at night. Second, I don't have permission to use a computer or a smart phone apart from study purposes. Moreover, my parents rarely let me go out with friends except there are necessary cases like birthdays or funerals for example. Third, I must follow my strict diet to keep myself healthy and sagacious for the coming University Entrance Examination. Futhermore, I do not have to do household chores because my parents want to facilitate my studying. All in all, my family rules help me to raise my awareness of discipline; I can say that they has made me a better person.
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My Family Rules
It is certain that each family has its own rules. Rules can help family members <em>(to)</em> get along better and make <em>the</em> family closer and closer. Mine has a few, especially for me, as I am in my final year at high school. <em>Firstly</em>, I am <em>not</em> allowed to watch <em>a lot of</em> television <em>until</em> I have finished all my homework and exercises. And my parents <em>rarely</em> let me stay up <em>very</em> late at night. <em>Secondly</em>, I don't have a permission to use a <em>computers</em> or a <em>smart phones,</em> apart from study purposes. Moreover, my parents rarely let me go out with friends except <em>in</em> necessary cases, <em>like</em> birthdays or funerals for example. Third, I must follow my strict diet to keep myself healthy and sagacious for the coming University Entrance Examination. Futhermore, I do not have to do household chores because my parents want to facilitate my studying. All in all, my family rules help me to raise my awareness of discipline, I can say that they <em>have</em> made me a better person.
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