Catherine
Entry #8: A new member. Last week my uncle bought a bird for my mom. It was a parakeet. I don't like to have pets into birdcage, I can't see them because I think they could have a better environment, out of a cage. I made a nice area without it seems like a jail. I looked for a good name to her, and I liked Lori. At first I didn't want that parakeet because I like big pets like a cat or a dog because I can hug them. But now I really want Lori, I like to teach her tricks and more things. My cat thinks Lori is chicken, we have to stop him when he is so near of the bird. He is starting to learn that Lori is a new member.
May 27, 2015 11:46 PM
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Entry #8: A new member.

Last week, my uncle bought a bird for my mom. It was a parakeet. I don't like to have pets <em>in cages</em>, I <em>don't like seeing them like that</em> because I think <em>that</em> they could have a better environment, out of a cage. I made a nice area <em>(for the bird)</em> without <em>the cage, which</em> seems like a jail. I <em>was thinking about</em> a good name <em>for</em> her, and I liked Lori. At first, I didn't want that parakeet because I like big <em>animals</em> (like a <em>cats</em> or a <em>dogs</em>) because I can hug them. But now I really <em>like having</em> Lori, I like to teach her tricks and <em>other</em> things. My cat thinks <em>that</em> Lori is <em>a</em> chicken, we have to stop him <em>whenever</em> he is <em>too close to</em> the bird. He is starting to learn that Lori is a new member <em>(of the family).</em>

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Really good!! I like this story :) haha

May 28, 2015
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Entry #8: A New Member.

Last week my uncle bought a bird for my mom. It was a parakeet. I don't like to have put pets into a bird cage, I can't see look at them, because I think they could have a better environment, out of a cage. I made a nice area without it seemings like a jail. I looked for a good name to for her, and I liked Lori. At first I didn't want that parakeet, because I prefer [like] big pets, like a cat or a dog, because I can hug them. But now I really want Lori. I like to teach her tricks and more things. My cat thinks Lori is a chicken, we have to stop him when he is so near of very close/near to the bird. He is starting to learn that Lori is a new member of the family.

May 27, 2015
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Entry #8: A new member.

Last week my uncle bought a bird for my mom. It was a parakeet. I don't like to have pets into birdcage, I can't see them because I think they could have a better environment, out of a cage. I made a nice area without it seeming like a jail. I looked for a good name for her, and I liked Lori. At first I didn't want that parakeet because I like big pets like a cat or a dog because I can hug them. But now I really want Lori, I like to teach her tricks and more things. My cat thinks Lori is a chicken, we have to stop him when he is so near of the bird. He is starting to learn that Lori is a new member.

May 27, 2015
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