Anyone can help me?? This is abstract of my gradate thesis This study investigates which menu type of smartwatch that has circular small screen is efficient to search apps and giving the color cue

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Anyone can help me?? This is abstract of my gradate thesis This study investigates which menu type of smartwatch that has circular small screen is efficient to search apps and giving the color cues on dynamic interface is effective. The goal is that suggest menu design guideline in future. Current menu of smartwatch can be categorized into four types, one-line list, two-line grid, space-rotating, 군집형. In experiment 1, these menu types were tested to compare the performance and subject evaluation of each menu type. two-line grid menu and 군집형 were more efficient at performance, space-rotating menu were considered to be more satisfactory and one-list menu got bad evaluation at performance and subuctive evaluation. The results of experiment 2 reveal that the color cues significantly improve the one-line list’s performance and the 군집형’s performance, percived efficiency and glanceablity. Otherwise, it has negative effect on space-rotating menu. The conclusions suggested 보완점 and implications for each menu type based on 1,2 experiments and qualitative research. does it sounds natural??

May 28, 2015 3:42 AM

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The limited real estate on smart watches offer unique challenges in the development of an effective and pleasant menu. To suggest menu design guidelines for future products, different menu formats of circular screened smartwatch menus were tested for app searching efficiency and the effect of the addition of color cues on the dynamic interface was measured. Current smartwatch menus can be categorized into four types: one-line list, two-line grid, space-rotating, and 군집형. In the first experiment the performance of the different menu types was tested (how?)(via _______) and the menus were subjectively evaluated (by a test group?). The two-line grid and 군집형 menu types were the most efficient, the space-rotating menu had the highest subjective rating among (consumers?), and the one-line list menu was found to be lacking in regards to both performance and consumer satisfaction. The results of the second experiment 2 reveal that the addition of color cues significantly improve the one-line list’s performance and have a positive effect on the perceived efficiency, aesthetic approval, and performance of the 군집형 menu type, but actually has a negative effect on the (performance, approval, efficiency?) of the space-rotating menu. Conclusions drawn from two experiments and supplementary qualitative research suggest effective improvements (보완점 – points to improve on?) and the implications of each menu type.

보완: supplement/ complement/ improvements
점: points.
If you link a picture of the 군집형 menu type, I can try to describe it. Clustered menu?!?!

May 28, 2015

It doesn't sound very natural, unfortunately. Also I'm having a difficult time understanding what you're talking about. When you say that the "current menu of smartwatches can be categorized into four types", I was expecting you to give either an example or a explanation of what those types are like (an illustration would obviously be better for something like this). I'd like to also suggest that you use paragraphs to separate the different points you're trying to make. Shortening your sentences will also help with clarity. Create topic sentences and transitions, that connect and build on the information you're trying to convey. The last sentence is especially hard to decipher. I can't be certain what you're trying to say in the last sentence.

May 28, 2015

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