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The mobile phone was a great invention. Discuss. Since the first mobile phone was invented many years ago, it was a incredible revolution. However, has this invention really improved our lives or it has also changed our lives in a negative way? Having the opportunity to own a mobile phone surely is very useful. The greatest benefit of the mobile phone certainly is the opportunity to use it everywhere, due to the fact that it does not have threads. For example, many times can happen that we are late and be able to get in touch with someone for warning him is a great advantage. In addition, mobile phone allows us to send written messages. Sending a text to someone is very useful , quick and also cheaper than make a phone call. Finally, it’s important saying that nowadays mobile phone are really technological: they are like small computers. We can use internet and with it we have the possibility to using the gps navigation device, taking photographs, and many other interesting things. On the other hand mobile phones have also many disadvantages. The first downside is that there is a tendency for people to use it every time. It is a misbehavior since cell phones are also dangerous for the health due to the radiations that they emit. Another drawback is that they could cause a real phone-addiction: it is a disease that lead to have dizziness, migraine and the vision to think that the cell phone is the only way to communicate with other people. However, another worrying downside is that nowadays also child increasingly use cellular. This is negative for their growth and their learning. In conclusion, the invention of mobile phone led many advantages and disadvantages, but on the whole, I believe that it has improved our lives in a considerable way.
May 28, 2015 9:39 AM
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