Julia
How did I get here? I wanted to find a new way to pratice my English daily that's why I have started to surf on site and have tried to look for a good place to speak and exchange with English native speakers. Speaking English will be a real opportunity for my career. In fact, more and more jobs require to write and speak correctly in English. This is the forst reason why I came here. The second one is because I love travelling. I spend a lot of time all over the world and I will appreciate to speak more and more with foreign people. I would love to share time between practicing it and help you to practice your French. Hope to speak with you soon. Best.
May 28, 2015 3:26 PM
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How did I get here? <em>"Why am I here?" sounds better.</em>

I wanted to find a new way to practice my English daily every day <em>("daily" is correct, but this sounds better)</em> so that's why I have started to surf on this site and have tried to look for a good place to speak and exchange interact with English native speakers.
Speaking English will be a real opportunity boost for my career. In fact, more and more jobs require to that you write and speak correctly in English. <em>(I suggest: "You need to speak and write English for more and more jobs.")</em> This That is the first reason why that I came here. The second one is because I love travelling. I spend a lot of time all over the world and I will appreciate to speak more and more with will love speaking with more and more foreigners people. <em>(Use "foreigners" instead of "foreign people". "foreigners" is used less and less in polite English, it sounds slightly racist. I suggest "people abroad" or "people in other countries".)</em>
I would love to share time between practicing it and help you to practice your French. <em>(Your meaning is clear here but it sounds a little awkward in English. I suggest: "I would love to practice it while helping you to practice your French.")</em>
Hope to speak with you soon.
Best.

<em>"Best" on its own isn't how anglophones would end a letter. They would probably use their name, like this:</em>

<em>All the best,</em>

<em>    Julia</em>

May 30, 2015

How did I get here?

I wanted to find a new way to pratice my English daily that's why I have started to surf on this site and have tried to look for a good place to speak and exchange with English native speakers.
Speaking English will be a real opportunity for my career. In fact, more and more jobs require employees to write and speak correctly in English. This is the first reason why I came here. The second one is because I love travelling. I spend a lot of time all over the world and I would appreciate speaking more and more with foreign people.
I would love to share time between practicing it and helping you to practice your French.
Hope to speak with you soon.
Best.

 

Good work Julia! :)

May 29, 2015
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