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Some people like to give help to the local communicator provide people with directly help Some people prefer to give help to the pool with their owe strength while others.the richer,are more likely to assist people by donating their money to the charitable organizations.In my perspective,they are both beneficial for those who need assistance.It is essential to analyze the two sides before extending to concluded. Admittedly,to provide money is not the only way to help the impoverished and they not only need funding support but personal help in some cases.For examples,disabled people move inconveniently.It is necessary to have someone assist them to go outside enjoy the fresh air outdoor and help them back in the normal life as general people.Moreover,increasing number of elders are forced to live in elderly care centers.This is because their children are so busy that do not have time to look after them.Thus,it causes the labor shortage in nursing center and needs volunteers and personal strength to solve this issue. Meanwhile,donating money extend the assistance for the poor in various aspects.On one hand,money is capable of supplying the routine necessaries and possibly delivery to the people faster.In other words,it can be affordable to hire the quicker transportation.One the second hand,even the charitable organizations require funds fundamentally,due to they need equipment and labour to keep company running efficiently.Therefore, without the fund supporting,numerous goal for helping the poor would not be achieved. Overall,The arguments above are equally importance in terms of giving support for the disadvantaged group. Personally speaking,there both show the goodwill of the society.So it is not important to measure which one is more beneficial.

May 29, 2015 2:49 PM

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Some people prefer to give help to the pool poor with their owe own strength while others, the richer, are more likely to assist people by donating their money to the charitable organizations (you can just say "charity). In my perspective, they are both beneficial for those who need assistance. It is essential to analyze the two sides before extending to concluded reaching a conclusion.

Admittedly, to provide providing money is not the only way to help the impoverished and they not only need funding support but also personal help in some cases. For examples, disabled people move inconveniently. It is necessary to have someone assist them to go outside and enjoy the fresh air outdoor and help them back into the normal life as just like general people. Moreover, an increasing number of elders are forced to live in elderly care centers. This is because their children are so busy that do not have time to look after them. Thus, it causes the labor shortage in nursing centers and they needs volunteers and personal strength to solve this issue.

Meanwhile, donating money extends the assistance for the poor in various aspects. On one hand, money is capable of supplying the routine necessaries necessities and possibly delivery delivering to the people faster. In other words, it can be affordable to hire the quicker transportation. One the second hand, even the charitable organizations require funds fundamentally, due to since they need equipment and labour to keep company companies running efficiently. Therefore, without the fund supporting financial support, numerous goals for helping the poor would not be achieved.

Overall, The arguments above are equally importance important in terms of giving support for the disadvantaged group. Personally speaking, there they both show the goodwill of the society. So it is not important to measure which one is more beneficial.

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"Due to" is used before a noun, whereas "Since" can be used before a clause. For example, "Due to many factors," or "due to smoking." "Since I am old," or "since we need money."

"Importance" is a noun, and "important" is an adjective. "Computers are important." "Computers have importance."

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