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伙伴使用小船。 一位我的伙伴离河住很近,所以每春间大水冲垮所有的路。他说上学以前他应该使用小春。
May 29, 2015 6:49 PM
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伙伴使用小船。使用小船的朋友

一位我的伙伴离河住很近我有一位伙伴住得离河很近所以每春间大水冲垮所有的路(1)他说上学以前他应该使用小春(2)

 

1. 所以 so 每 every 春 spring 间 between 大水 big water 冲垮 burst, shatter 所有 all 的 possessive case 路 road. I think you should reconstruct this sentence, and choose the right word.

2. 他 he 说 said 上学 go to school 以前 before 他 he 应该 should 使用 use 小春 this is a typo but i assume you meant 小船. This sentence have the same problem as the former one.

 

Maybe you should write an english version of this text, because right now it's difficult to understand.

May 29, 2015

伙伴使用小船。

一位我的伙伴离河住很近,所以每春间大水冲垮所有的路。他说上学以前他应该使用小春。

 

It is always best to have an English version so that we can exactly know what you are trying to express.  Takes much guesswork out especially when the wrong character is used.

 

One of my pals lives near the river, 我友在河辺的附近住therefore every spring high water wash away all the roads.  因此每个春节时, 水高把所有的道路沖掉He says he has to use a boat to get to school. 他說就此要用小船/去学校/上課/

May 29, 2015
One of my pals lives near the river, therefore every spring high water wash away all the roads. He says he has to use a boat to get to school.
May 29, 2015
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