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I am The Prince Of Utopic Kingdom 2 I am not interested in throne. Because there are two princes ,who are older than me, too except me. But they are not interested in throne too like me. As a result, in this scenario there is no throne fight. It is more likely comedy. For instance, I -as a prince- enjoy playing computer games, and i am interested in new technologies. And I am interested in new Economy Minister. We are trying to write our dialogs now, it was just the frame. I hope it will be well. Even if it won't, i think we will enjoy a lot. :)
May 29, 2015 8:20 PM
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I am The Prince Of Utopic Kingdom 2

I am not interested in the throne. Because there are two princes, who are both older than me, too except me. But they are also not interested in the throne too like me. As a result, in this scenario there is no throne fight. It is more likely a comedy. For instance, I -as a prince- enjoy playing computer games, and i am interested in new technologies technology. And I am interested in new Economy Minister. We are trying to write our dialogs now, so far it was just the frame outline. I hope it will be well good. Even if it won't, i think we will enjoy it a lot. :)

 

Well done! Not really sure what you meant by "too except me," but I think you can remove it.

Also, "outline" is commonly used for writing and it means you have a plan. "Frame" is more commonly used with physical things, like "The frame of a picture" or "The frame of her face."

May 29, 2015

I am The Prince Of Utopic Kingdom 2

I am not interested in the throne., Because there are two princes ,who are older than me, too except me. But they are not interested in the throne too like me too. As a result, in this scenario there is no throne fight. It is more likely comedy. For instance, I -as a prince- enjoy playing computer games, and i am interested in new technologies. And I am interested in new Economy Minister. We are trying to write our dialogues now, it was just the frame. I hope it will be well. Even if it won't, i think we will enjoy it a lot. :)

May 29, 2015
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