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无月二十九号 我有四只狗和两只猫。我最喜爱宠物是Lola。她是猫,和很可爱,但是不顺气。我们有一支新小猫。他叫Oliver。Lola 不喜欢他。 [English: I have 4 dogs and 2 cats. My favorite pet is Lola. She is a cat, and she is very cute, but she isn't nice. We have one new kitten. He's called Oliver. Lola doesn't like him.]
May 30, 2015 4:07 AM
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月二十九号

我有四只狗和两只猫。我最喜爱宠物是Lola。一只猫,很可爱,但是不顺气漂亮。我们新获小猫一它叫Oliver。Lola 不喜欢它。

[English: I have 4 dogs and 2 cats. My favorite pet is Lola. She is a cat, and she is very cute, but she isn't nice. We have one new kitten. He's called Oliver. Lola doesn't like him.]

June 6, 2015
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月二十九号(五)

我有四只(you can also use 条 here to avoid repetition)狗和两只猫。我最喜爱(的)宠物是Lola。她是(一只很可爱的猫),但是她不太友好。我们有一支(只)新小猫。他叫Oliver。(但)Lola

 

不喜欢他。

[English: I have 4 dogs and 2 cats. My favorite pet is Lola. She is a cat, and she is very cute, but she isn't nice. We have one new kitten. He's called Oliver. Lola doesn't like him.]

May 30, 2015
你翻译的很好。但是细节上有一丢丢的小问题,中国人一般称动物为“它”,“他”和“她”是用在第三人(人类)称上的。在日常翻译中我建议你使用“它”,这样翻译更接近中国人的使用习惯。skype([email protected])QQ(79831052)kakao(AlanLin94)你可以加我,我们可以做个朋友,互相学习对方的母语。
June 11, 2015

五月二十九号

我有四只狗和两只猫。我最喜爱宠物是Lola。(它)是猫,很可爱,但是不顺气(温顺)。我们有一(只)新小猫。(它)叫Oliver。Lola 不喜欢(它)

[English: I have 4 dogs and 2 cats. My favorite pet is Lola. She is a cat, and she is very cute, but she isn't nice. We have one new kitten. He's called Oliver. Lola doesn't like him.]

June 4, 2015

月二十九号

我有四只狗和两只猫。我最喜爱宠物是Lola。她是猫,很可爱,但是不顺气不友好。我们有一支一只新小猫。他叫Oliver。Lola 不喜欢他。

[English: I have 4 dogs and 2 cats. My favorite pet is Lola. She is a cat("一只猫"or"一条猫"), and she is very cute, but she isn't nice. We have one new kitten. He's called Oliver. Lola doesn't like him.]

June 1, 2015
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