Breaking Bad. Hi, I started watch serial called "Breaking Bad". It's story about one teacher of chemical and his transformation from shy and poor man to aggressive and rich drug diler. The story b

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Breaking Bad. Hi, I started watch serial called "Breaking Bad". It's story about one teacher of chemical and his transformation from shy and poor man to aggressive and rich drug diler. The story began from simple American family. No money. All time them count dollars. Walter is name primary hero. Must to work on two jobs. In the morning he work in school and after in big washing cars station. In one day , it was hard day for him, when he wash car fall down and lose control. Ambulance got him in hospital. In hospital after some checks found cancer. And told him after 18 months he is die, but them can help if he pay money. It interesting serial. To be continued. ..

May 30, 2015 11:28 AM

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Breaking Bad.

Hi,
I started watching a serial TV serie called "Breaking Bad". It's a story about one a chemistry teacher of chemical and his transformation from being shy and poor man, to an aggressive and rich drug diler dealer.
The story began from with a simple American family that has no money. No money. All time them count dollars They need to count their money at all times. Walter is the name of primary hero main character. He needsMust to work on two jobs. In the morning he work in a school and after in a big washing cars station carwash. In One day, it was hard day for him, when he wash car fall down and lose control the carwash fell apart, injuring him. It was a hard day for him.The Ambulance got brought him in to the hospiltal. In hospital After some checking him, the doctours found out that he had cancer. and They told him that he has only 18 months he is die left, but they can help him if he pays money the doctors. It is an interesting serial series. To be continued. .

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May 30, 2015

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May 30, 2015

Breaking Bad. Hi, I started watching a serial called "Breaking Bad". It's the story about a teacher of chemistry and his transformation from shy and poor man to an aggressive and rich drug dealer. The story began with a simple American family. No money. All the time they count dollars. Walter is the name of the main character.He has to work on two jobs. In the morning he works in a school and after that he works in a big carwash. One day , it was hard day for him, when he was washing a car he fell down and lost control. An ambulance took him to hospital. In hospital after some checks they found cancer. And told him after 18 months he will die, but they can help if he pays money. It is an interesting serial. To be continued. .. I loved that show! Breaking Bad.

May 30, 2015

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