Daniel
Holidays To begin with, Last year, I went to Cazorla. Cazorla is a national forest in Jaén, it is situated in the south of Spain. In this national park there are rivers, trees, etc. Also, there are lynxes but, only in this area of Spain. This year, I would like to go to the beach but, I don´t want to sunbathe, because I have the sensitive skin. Málaga would be a good option. There, I could see museums and monuments such as, the Picasso ´s Museum and the Thysen´s museum. I would go to museums in the morning and in the evening I would go to the beach. At this hour it is not hot. If I buy the tickets now for the bus on the website, I will save money. To sum up: I will have a great time.
May 30, 2015 3:09 PM
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Holidays

(To begin with,) Last year, I went to Cazorla, (. Cazorla is) a national forest in Jaén, which (it) is situated in the south of Spain. In this national park there are rivers, trees, etc. Also, Lynx can be found, (there are lynxes) but (,) only in this area of Spain.

This year, I would like to go to the beach but, I don´t want to sunbathe, because I have (the) sensitive skin.

Málaga would be a good option. There, I could see museums and monuments such as (, the) Picasso ´s Museum and (the) Thysen´s museum. I would .... go to / visit the ...museums in the morning and in the evening I would go to the beach. At this hour it is not hot. If I buy the tickets now for the bus on the website, I will save money.

To sum up: I will have a great time. / I am sure I will have a great time!

 

Great. We commonly use lynx for the plural form. 

 

May 30, 2015
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Holidays

To begin with, last year, I went to Cazorla. Cazorla is a national forest in Jaén. It is situated in the south of Spain. In this national park there are rivers, trees, etc. Also, there are lynxes, found only in this area of Spain.

This year, I would like to go to the beach, but I don't want to sunbathe, because I have sensitive skin.

Málaga would be a good option. There, I could see museums and monuments such as the Picasso Museum and the Thyssen museum. I would go to museums in the morning and in the evening I would go to the beach. At this time it is not hot. If I buy the tickets now for the bus on the website, I will save money.

To sum up: I will have a great time.

 

<em>Hola Daniel. Mi novia y yo vamos a ir de vacaciones al embalse de Iznajar, cerca de Jaen y Málaga en agosto. ¡Estamos muy emocionado!</em>

May 30, 2015
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Holidays

To begin with, last year I went to Cazorla. Cazorla is a national forest in Jaén. It is situated in the south of Spain. In this the national park there are rivers, trees, etc. Also, There are also lynxes but only in this that area of Spain.

This year I would like to go to the beach but I don't want to sunbathe because I have the sensitive skin.

Málaga would be a good option. There, I could see museums and monuments such as the Picasso ´s Museum and the Thysen´s museum. I would go to museums in the morning and in the evening I would go to the beach. At this hour the moment it is not hot. If I buy the bus tickets now for the bus on the website now (or 'soon'), I will save money.

To sum up: I will have a great time.

May 30, 2015
Have a lovely holiday in Malaga!
May 30, 2015
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